"DISCORD!!!!!" He banged against an invisible wall that kept him from his prey. "WHEN I GET MY CLAWS ON YOU, I'LL RIP OUT YOUR SOUL AND DEVOUR YOUR CORPSE!!!!!"
I was going to point that out before anypony spotted it, but yes, this was inspired by that story. I just got to thinking of different scenes and the thoughts wouldn't leave my skull! But really, I'm not trying to rip his story, just something that popped into my head. And you'll find out how he is in the next chapter.
3318117 Because he has lots of powers doesn't make him a Gary Stu. There are several other factors that need to be addressed before that can be claimed but considering his level of hate and the fear he causes kinda removes the possibility of making friends easily or if at all (Not just with the other sentient races but possibly with the animals as will).
3318764 * Considering he came out of the mirror can we assume he was thrown into a Mirrored Version of Equestria. In other words were everything we know as light he was in the dark side (the exact opposite [Would kinda make sense since he came out of a mirror]). Plucked from his reality and thrown into a mirror versed version of the one Discord lives on just to entertain him while he was stoned (I would be beyond control of my rage when encountering him as will). * Would be interesting if not kinda funny if how he treats the Mane 6 is based off how one would treat the darker versions of them (I.E. Rainbow Factory Dash, Pinkamena Cupcake Pie, and ECT...).
Pretty epic entrance, kerp up the good work
Hmmm I see hints of Bleach but idk what else.... But seriously, I am loving this already.
I like the ending but it seems you plagiarized just a bit from the fic 'Somewhere I Belong' by Silent Pegasus
Not bad, looking forward for the next chapter.
Oh god, kill the Gary Stu with fire before it starts to have intercourse with ponies already.
Holy Fuck!
3317027
I was going to point that out before anypony spotted it, but yes, this was inspired by that story. I just got to thinking of different scenes and the thoughts wouldn't leave my skull! But really, I'm not trying to rip his story, just something that popped into my head. And you'll find out how he is in the next chapter.
3318117 Because he has lots of powers doesn't make him a Gary Stu. There are several other factors that need to be addressed before that can be claimed but considering his level of hate and the fear he causes kinda removes the possibility of making friends easily or if at all (Not just with the other sentient races but possibly with the animals as will).
3318764
* Considering he came out of the mirror can we assume he was thrown into a Mirrored Version of Equestria. In other words were everything we know as light he was in the dark side (the exact opposite [Would kinda make sense since he came out of a mirror]). Plucked from his reality and thrown into a mirror versed version of the one Discord lives on just to entertain him while he was stoned (I would be beyond control of my rage when encountering him as will).
* Would be interesting if not kinda funny if how he treats the Mane 6 is based off how one would treat the darker versions of them (I.E. Rainbow Factory Dash, Pinkamena Cupcake Pie, and ECT...).
very good story so far.
i can't wait to read the next chapter.
the beginning is just like the fanfic "somewhere i belong" almost exact