Some things that ponies go through can not be explained in the world of friendship, But we are not in that world are we? Here are the Ponies who went to Tartarus and back (most didn't) and their stories.
Thank you Edgar Allan Poe, I might just have a chapter for this. Oh how he inspires me...
Lets see, a facade, the king of lesbians, the cupcake fairy, and flames from hell... Why is it the only thing sweet about all of this is my user name which has no fucking correspondence to any of this.
Most of them are grammar errors, but there's too many for me to resolve in one comment (also, I am a bit too busy these days unfortunately... ). Some issues with the overall presentation as well, but not too many problems there.
You have interesting ideas, though. The execution needs a bit more work, but otherwise you seem to be on the right track...
For one, Clive Barker wrote The Hellbound Heart (off of which the movie Hellraiser was based ), and I think that would fall in well with the general vein of your stories.
3393442 Not really. Well... at least the stories written by me don't copy an author's writing style... but now that you say that. I already knew about Poe. But I wonder who else might be rolling in there grave now.
3398256 Believe me when I say that at least two of those things are gonna be present in the next stories that I'm working on (not gonna spoil any of the other's works. I'll let them do that ). Either way... expect a big finale that's been teased twice already (Oh gosh now you're really gonna have to stay and read ).
I really enjoyed writing this chapter. It let me take different angles on things that I had wanted to try out.
3362554 That escalated quickly.
The mysteriousness of it all is quite interesting, but the frequent errors make it difficult for me to immerse myself in the story...
Still, you have my attention...
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Errors? Do tell
at least, if that's ok with you...
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Thank you Edgar Allan Poe, I might just have a chapter for this. Oh how he inspires me...
Lets see, a facade, the king of lesbians, the cupcake fairy, and flames from hell... Why is it the only thing sweet about all of this is my user name which has no fucking correspondence to any of this.
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Most of them are grammar errors, but there's too many for me to resolve in one comment (also, I am a bit too busy these days unfortunately... ). Some issues with the overall presentation as well, but not too many problems there.
You have interesting ideas, though. The execution needs a bit more work, but otherwise you seem to be on the right track...
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I, uhh... Vat?
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Because we need somepony who can use their sweet name to bring the worse of havoc!... that is if it's alright with you...
So are you cycling through the writing style of different horror authors, essentially?
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eeyup.
Why do you ask?
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I was pondering on your possible plans for Richard Matheson or Clive Barker.
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Well I have not read any of their work, so I really had no plans, but if you would like to help in some way you are welcome to.
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For one, Clive Barker wrote The Hellbound Heart (off of which the movie Hellraiser was based ), and I think that would fall in well with the general vein of your stories.
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Not really. Well... at least the stories written by me don't copy an author's writing style... but now that you say that. I already knew about Poe. But I wonder who else might be rolling in there grave now.
List of things I must see:
Mutilation of things that are alive to experience it
Cannibalism, preferably performed by Fluttershy
And that is all
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Oh you will see that. The next series of chapters will have that.
3398239 My immediate reaction:
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Believe me when I say that at least two of those things are gonna be present in the next stories that I'm working on (not gonna spoil any of the other's works. I'll let them do that ). Either way... expect a big finale that's been teased twice already (Oh gosh now you're really gonna have to stay and read ).
I'm a few months late to the party but a good read.
WHY ARE YOU READING THE NECRONOMICON!