• Member Since 23rd Jul, 2013
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Spirit of EverFree


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Lyra has always been a outcast to the other pony's for being weird or overly nerdy. Obsessive reading of myths and fairytales ranging from Human to the legends of Discord. None of that's really after all right?
NOTE Update: I changed the rating from everyone to Teen due to the teasing Lyra well go through and some events that well happen later in the story. AlsoThis story is set pre season one so Twilight and spike haven't moved into ponyville yet.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

You need to fix your capitalization and apostrophe use.

This is intriguing! I like how this features a young Lyra (one of my favorites) and how it also has a hint of realism, being teased for being different. I really wanna know more, don't stop creating! :D
5 / 5 stars!

3294574Thanks I'll get right on that once I have the time.

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Thank you! ^-^ already in works of chapter 2 and 3

awww, poor Lyra! I feel empathy for her... I was bullied for having odd interests when I was in grade school. I do feel she'll grow from this experience though, I just know it..!
5 / 5 stars

Good going so far but you need ta put the good times to lyra fast or I can't read this -tank

4222983 There is some good times for her coming up for example at the end of "She likes to party" Lyra may have gotten in trouble with the teacher but made a connection of friendship with pinkie :) next chapter should make you more happy for Lyra. and thanks for the feedback glad people are liking the story :pinkiehappy:

4223431 ok good I can't wait for the next Chapter

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