Fire In Their Hearts
written by ThunderCracker
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It was written well.
Though a description of Dante would have been nice. You don't even mention that he is human. Sure you kinda said so in the description, but it should have been mentioned in the actual story.
Some backstory would have been nice too.
3280504 I could edit that later if you like.
Hmm. Short but sweet.
Anyways, Dante needs some more fleshing out. What's his backstory — and more importantly, how did he get wings and become a Wonderbolts cadet?
Short and to the point Clop. Probably would have been better to just leave Dante a pony though.
Sort and Sweet.
Good jod.
short sweet and to the point. just ur average pointless clop. Me likey.
id love to see this turned into a serious fic. not many HIE fics that pair with Spitfire
3311062 Hmm, never thought of it, but I shall consider it.