Prologue 3: The Kind Knight
“I just don’t know what I’m supposed to do with you anymore. Nopony even comes close to your academic scores. Your spellwork is the best I’ve ever seen. And your healing? I think you’d give some of the clerics a run for their money.” The stony faced pegasus mare behind the ancient mahogany desk’s face hardened. “But your blade work is worse than many of the brand new recruits. You really won’t reconsider being reassigned to the temple?”
The target of her ire, if possible shrank back into her flowing pink mane even more. “W--well I…”
The Captain raised a hoof cutting her off. “I know, I know. Your father refuses to let you transfer. He ignores every suggestion I send. Last time he threatened to have ME busted down to squire if I brought it up again.”
The young pegasi lowered her head further, so much so, her long hair touched the floor. “I’m sorry.” The apology was more akin to a squeak.
“Fluttershy… you’re a kind, gentle mare. It’s my opinion that if you grew a little backbone, you’d be the finest paladin ever produced by the knighthood. You don’t like fighting? That’s good! We’re not SUPPOSED to like the fighting. But sometimes it’s unavoidable. Sometimes a threat to the safety of the realm and her people isn’t going to listen to kind words. Sometimes we have to do something we don’t like, for the good of all. I know this isn’t where you want to be, but…”
“You’re wrong!”
The Captain’s eyebrows shot up at the sudden, and vehement protest. “That’s not it at all! I do want to be here! I’m proud to be a member of the order, and even prouder that you’d consider me good enough to be a Wonderbolt one day! I just…” All the strength left her voice, as if somepony had deflated a bellows. “...I just can’t follow through with my swings. I’m great with my sword, really I am! But the thought of hurting something, or even somepony… it twists my stomach in knots.”
Captain Spitfire cut an impressive figure in her sleek, form fitting mithral armor. The lightweight metal allowed her speed and aerial maneuverability to remain completely unimpeded. The Wonderbolts insignia proudly emblazoned upon her chest, only her helm was set aside letting her wind-swept mane free into the air. Many ponies joked about how she was in full armor all the time, but she brushed it aside stating she needed to be ready for trouble at a moments notice.
Spitfire rose from her desk and came around to Fluttershy’s side. “Walk with me, squire.”
Responding immediately, the oft-timid mare rose to her hooves and fell into step with the Captain. “Your father is the head of the order. He absolutely refuses to allow me to remove you from duty, or to transfer you to the temple. That being said, I can’t take the chance of sending you out with your fellow knights, only to have you falter on the battlefield. It’s not just your own life on the line, but your brothers and sisters in arms. They’re depending on you just as much as the ponies we fight to protect. If you can’t fight, you’d only be a hinderance.”
“It occurs to me that some of this might be my fault. I haven’t taken as much of an active role in your development as I should have.” Fluttershy’s heart sank as she realized where Captain Spitfire was leading her. “So I’m going to give you a chance to prove you deserve to be a real knight. That you can handle yourself on the battlefield if backed into a corner.”
“T--technically my sire should be doing this…”
“Technically. But he’s investigating a disturbance in the Everfree and not here right now. And he’s in complete agreement with me over all this. We discussed it at length, we can’t have you jeopardizing your fellows.” Spitfire calmly strolled into the practice arena, drawing many curious looks from the other paladins in squires currently training there. “You and I are going to have a practice bout. If I like what I see, we’ll figure things out from there. If I don’t, I’ll arrange it so you’re doing desk work from now until the day your father retires, at which time you can transfer to the temple. Am I clear?”
Forcing herself not to keel over from all the stress, Fluttershy could only nod.
“I asked you a question, squire.”
“Y--yes, ma’am.”
“Good. Get a suit of practice armor and meet me in the ring.”
The young pegasus mare sighed as the Captain calmly strode to the ring, hefting a wooden sword and shield for herself. Moving to the racks of leather armor, Fluttershy shrugged the breastplate over her chest and fastened it securely. Securing the shield to her left fore leg, she belted the wooden sword around her flanks and climbed into the ring opposite the Captain.
Spitfire smoothly drew her faux sword raising it in a salute. Fluttershy did likewise, crouching into a ready stance. The Captain made the first move of course. Launching herself forward with a powerful thrust, wasting no time in trying to land a telling blow.
Fluttershy, to the Captain’s surprise, didn’t shriek, run, or duck. She smoothly raised her shield to intercept the incoming blade and deflect it, responding with a swift slash of her own and very nearly striking Spitfire in the chest.
The older mare backed away eyeing Fluttershy in a new light. “You didn’t seem very hesitant there.”
“Well they’re just wooden swords. I know I’m not going to really hurt you.”
Spitfire huffed softly and lunged in again. Fluttershy raised her shield to block, but the experienced captain reversed her strike and switched to a lightning fast vertical strike that cracked solidly against the bottom of her opponents muzzle.
Fluttershy staggered back in a daze, her jaw throbbing. “Does that not hurt?”
Now the younger pegasus narrowed her eyes, just a bit. Surprising the Captain a second time, she launched an offensive. Swift jabs that had Spitfire backing away or raising her shield in a constant attempt to block. The ferocity of Fluttershy’s attack had caught Spitfire completely off guard, and one of the strikes slipped through her guard, slamming into her shoulder and sending waves of numbing pain up the leg and through her barrel.
The gathered crowd ooo’d and ahh’d appreciatively. Typically when Fluttershy would practice it was only in private, away from prying eyes. She kept her eyes focused on Spitfire however, using the adrenaline of the fight to tune out the sounds of other ponies watching her. The pair settled into a give and take routine soon. Spitfire would attack, and be blocked by Fluttershy. Then Fluttershy would do the same. It was clear to all watching that the Captain was the superior swordsmare, but the timid young squire was no slouch.
Spitfire stepped back and raised her blade in salute again. Blinking at the abrupt end, Fluttershy did the same. The younger of the pair was sporting more than a few new bruises, but Spitfire had picked up a couple new welts herself. The two stepped out of the ring replacing their practice gear, Fluttershy waiting quietly for the Captain to speak.
Indicating Fluttershy to follow with a nod of her head, the Captain started back the way they’d come. “So, clearly you know how to handle a sword. The problem isn’t physical then, it’s mental.”
Fluttershy sighed softly. “I guess so. I’m sorry.”
Spitfire stopped outside the squires barracks. “Don’t apologize to me. Apologize to yourself. The only pony you’re letting down right now is you, Fluttershy. You have the potential for greatness in you, I know it. Being good with a sword isn’t what makes a paladin who they are. It’s what they do off the battlefield that’s more important. Even so, there are times when we have to use force. You say you want to be here. If that’s the case, you need to find something you feel is worth fighting for.”
Fluttershy lowered her eyes as she considered the Captain’s words. “Yes, ma’am. I’m-”
“Apologize again and you’ll be doing push ups until dinner. You’re dismissed for the day squire. I suggest you take some time and do some serious thinking.”
With a smart salute to her departing superior, Fluttershy turned and stepped into the room she shared with several of her younger fellows. She was the oldest squire by more than a couple years. By the time a pony had reached her age they’d either become a full paladin, or been dropped from the order.
Wiggling out of her tabard and folding it gently into the footlocker at the end of her bed, she delicately removed her saddle bags, slinging them over her flanks. Almost as an after thought she fastened her proper sword and shield across her back. No sense going into the most dangerous forest in the kingdom unprepared.
Walking through the Citadel of Light, Fluttershy found her fellows paying more attention to her than she preferred. What surprised her most of all however was the respect in many of the eyes she saw looking back at her. Feeling her cheeks burning with embarrassment she quickened her step into a brisk trot, moving to the edge of the floating portion of the fortress she sprang into the air, spreading her wings wide and catching a pleasant thermal to drift toward the ground on.
It was a beautiful day, at least. Saying a quiet word of thanks to the distant Lady Celestia for raising such a lovely sun, she fanned her wings wider giving them a lazy flap to keep herself aloft. The Everfree Forest wasn’t far from the Citadel’s position. After a rather short flight she found herself at the trees leading into the somewhat foreboding forest. Landing gently on the ground she tucked her wings tightly into her sides and started into the trees.
***
“Fluttershy, my dear friend, that is very nearly a perfect mend!”
Fluttershy smiled brightly at her zebra friends praise. “It’s nothing special. I learned it all from you, after all.”
Zecora smiled softly in return, delicately examining the injured blue jay’s wing. With infinite care she lifted the bird and settled him into a nest near the roof of her hut. “Come, come, let us step outside and gather some herbs, on the way we can discuss how to best care for birds.”
Following the strangely attired Zebra out into the grove she made her home in, Fluttershy took a moment to appreciate it’s beauty as she always did. There was something so comforting and inviting to the untamed wilds of the Everfree Forest to the young knight in training. Zecora’s hut was in actuality a hollowed out portion of an ancient elm tree. A picturesque brook babbled gently through the grove, running off into the forest. Wild flowers of every shape, size, and color imaginable covered the ground in a dizzying array of color.
Fluttershy always felt so calm and centered when she visited with the druidess. She’d chanced upon her during a training exercise in the Everfree. A pack of timber wolves had been chasing her through the woods, and an injured wing prevented her from flying away. It was Zecora who’d arrived and chased them away. After that, the two had become fast friends. Whenever she had a free moment, Fluttershy would visit to learn a bit of woodslore or animal care.
Today however, she was finding it hard to focus on Zecora’s litany of advice and information. Her thoughts kept straying back to Captain Spitfire’s words. “Fluttershy you are wearing such a sad frown, tell me… what has you feeling down?”
Ruffling her wings in agitation the pegasus sighed. “It’s something the Captain said to me. She said I have to find something worth fighting for if I want to be a real paladin.”
“Your Captain speaks wise, this is true… finding a reason to lift your sword is necessary, if becoming a knight is the path for you.”
“But how do I know what that reason is? How can I tell if it’s the right time to draw my sword? My sire told me a pony should never draw their blade unless they’re prepared to take a life but I don’t know if I could ever kill anypony…”
Zecora paused in her walk, lifting a hoof to stop Fluttershy, and nodding along the small river. The pegasus followed her gaze and saw a large bear swatting fish from the water and onto the bank to be eaten when she felt she’d accumulated enough. “Death is just as natural a part of the world as life is my young friend, there will come a time when we all must meet our end. Good and evil exist all the world through, we who champion good must at times decide the fate of those that would bring harm to others like you.”
Fluttershy watched the bear swat another fish to the bank, as a pair of cubs came trundling up to enjoy the meal their mother had provided. She was dimly aware of the druidess taking her leave, wrapped up in her own thoughts. Eventually she settled on the ground to watch the family of bears. It wasn’t long before the mother took note of her, casting her a warning glare before settling down with her cubs to eat.
The young knight-to-be watched the family of bears in silence for a time. This was something she could fight to protect. Not necessarily these bears, but a family’s right to live. To do the things everypony deserved to be free to do. She knew there were bad things in the world. Evils that couldn’t be reasoned with. She was even aware that there were ponies out there. So twisted and cruel that no amount of kindness would reach their hearts.
Still… the thought of actually killing one… she sighed and finally rose to her hooves. The sun was starting to set and she had to get back to the Citadel. Looking toward the sky, a flash of color caught her eye. Curiously she spread her wings taking flight. Flying in the Everfree was always a difficult venture. The trees were massively tall, grew close together, and had thick canopies.
Pushing through some branches she found herself in a clear, open space above the trees. Her eyes widened at the creature perched not a foot from her nose. A bird almost as large as she was gazed back at her with intelligent golden hued eyes. It’s plumage was a vivid mixture of reds, oranges, and yellows giving the impression of the birds bodies trailing flames.
“Oh my… um… hello there?”
The gorgeous bird crooned softly, turning its head to gaze at her with its other eye. Fluttershy settled unsteadily on a branch across from the bird. “I’ve never seen a bird like you before.”
The bird cooed softly again, ruffling it’s feathers and puffing its chest out with a touch of pride. Its antics drew a smile from the mare. “You certainly have lovely coloring. I wish I knew what you were.”
The bird spread its wings abruptly and vaulted from the branch, flying a short distance away and alighting in another tree, gazing back at her expectantly.
Confusion clear on her face, Fluttershy took off after the bird. “You want me to follow you?”
In response the bird jumped into the air again, flying further this time. Curiosity mingled with fear. Fluttershy knew the forest was home to many dangerous creatures, but this bird didn’t seem hostile. Deciding to err on the side of caution, Fluttershy reached within herself for one of the many abilities ever paladin possessed. Feeling the magic well up from her core and settle around her eyes, she gazed at the bird once more.
If it were an evil creature, her sight would reveal a crimson aura around the bird. Seeing nothing didn’t necessarily mean it was good aligned, but she knew it wasn’t evil and at worst its intentions were mischievous. Deciding to humor the bird she began to fly more assuredly. Noting the determination on the mare’s face, the bird seemed to nod and set off with a steadier pace.
Fluttershy followed it for a time, weaving around branches and through the trees deeper into the forest. Her trepidation grew as she realized she was deeper than she’d ever been before. She was about to consider turning back when the bird stopped abruptly, not landing in a tree as she expected but dropping to the forest floor.
Folding her wings against her body Fluttershy did likewise. Eyeing the bird curiously she approached, when the sudden sound of metal ringing on stone caught her ears. Perking them to their full height she creeped forward, into the bushes the bird had landed behind.
Just beyond her hiding place was a deep chasm. She could see many ponies chained together by their hind legs, holding picks and shovels. Standing above them, cracking the occasional whip or giving some slow worker a vicious jab with a rusted spear were large, bipedal canine creatures. Fluttershy sucked in her breath. “Diamond dogs…”
“Is this what you wanted to…” She trailed off as she realized the bird had left. She was alone in the forest, overlooking a gem mine being mined by enslaved ponies. Righteous fury flared in the young mare’s heart at the sight of her fellows being treated in such a way. Her detect evil effect was still working, and she could see brilliant crimson auras surrounding each of the canine beasts.
Fluffing her wings nervously she stared down at the mine. She knew the smart thing to do would be go back to the Citadel and get reinforcements, then come down in force. She turned to do just that when a flash of light off metal caught her eye. Turning her attention to the bright glint, her breath caught in her throat.
A brilliant mithral shield lay tossed haphazardly on its side against one of the filthy huts the dogs must use as their living spaces. She recognized the symbol emblazoned proudly across the front as that of her sire’s. Could he have been captured, and even now be held prisoner?
Narrowing her eyes she didn’t see any sort of aura’s around the hut, meaning it was likely unguarded. Taking a deep breath to gather her courage she crept from her hiding place, tucking her wings into her sides and angling downward for a rapid dive toward the back of the hut. Flaring her wings open at the last second halted her descent and she landed as quietly as she could.
Carefully peeking around the edge of the hut, she detected one of the beasts approaching from the right, but it was still a short ways off. Quickly slipping around to the front of the hut she ducked inside and shut the door gently behind herself. Turning she found a well built unicorn stallion chained to the ground, a thick spike rammed clean through one of his hind hooves and actually pinning him to the rocky ground.
His white coat was caked with blood and dirt, while his messy blue streaked mane and tail were equally caked in blood. “Sir Shining Armor!” She hissed softly under her breath.
The stallion stirred, cracking his eyes open. “F--Fluttershy? What’re you doing here? How’d you…” He hissed sharply in pain as the hoof with the spike rammed through it shifted, jarring the metal a bit.
“Oh… oh dear. Just relax m’lord, I’ll get you out of here.”
Shining Armor nodded. “I don’t know or care how you found me. If you can get me loose and patched up we can get back and bring reinforcements. There aren’t too many dogs here, one or two more knights should be able to do it.”
Fluttershy frowned at the sound of paws thudding outside. She shrank back into the corner and held her breath waiting for the diamond dog to pass. Keeping her ears trained toward the door she crept back over to her sire. “Alright sir, this is going to hurt…”
Fluttershy offered him the hilt of her sword to bite down on, which he did gratefully. Taking a deep breath she moved to his injured hoof, and gripped the spike firmly. Already he groaned and bit down harder on the leather hilt. Closing her eyes, she took a second breath and heaved as hard as she could, ripping the spike out of the ground and her fellow paladin’s hoof.
Shining groaned loudly as pain filled shivers wracked his body. Fluttershy hastily laid her hooves over the openly bleeding sore, calling on another of her abilities. Warm healing magic flooded through her hooves into Shining’s, the bleeding stopping almost immediately. “I’m sorry sir… we’ll need to get you to a cleric to properly close the hole.”
A few moments of labored breathing later, Shining Armor spat the sword from his mouth. He waited patiently as Fluttershy wound some bandages from her bag around his hoof. “It’s….nng… alright Fluttershy. You did just fine. Now let’s get out of here.”
Fluttershy set her jaw firmly. “We don’t need to go back to the Citadel for another paladin m’lord.”
He raised his eyebrows. “We don’t?”
She shook her head. “Your reinforcements are right here.”
Warring emotions flared up in the stallions eyes. “Fluttershy I appreciate the sentiment but you… y’know… have your uh… no killing thing.”
Fluttershy frowned. “I don’t like the idea, and I think we should give them a chance to surrender peacefully. But you would have died from the infection in your hoof. And who knows how many ponies they’ve already killed in their mines. They have to be stopped, and they have to be stopped now.”
Shining Armor stared hard at his squire. He’d only been in charge of her for the last year and a half, after her least sire sent her away in disgust. He was getting somewhat frustrated himself, but like Spitfire he could see the enormous potential she had dwelling inside. Finally he nodded. “Alright Fluttershy. First off we need to get my arms back.”
She nodded as if expecting this. “Your shield is right outside the hut. I’m not sure where your sword is, but there are a few less impressive weapons piled outside too.”
“Their leader took it for himself. Thought it was ‘shiny’ enough that it should belong to him. I’ll make do with a loaner until he can be convinced to give mine back. Let’s move squire.”
Drawing her own sword and shield from her back, Fluttershy took the lead, again surprising him. “Yes sir.” Easing outside she looked back and forth, her evil detecting sight showing no foe nearby, she shoved the door open further allowing her sire to exit. Shining Armor walked with only a slight limp on his bad hoof, Fluttershy knew her healing well. Reclaiming his fine shield and choosing one of the long swords for himself he turned to the mare with a resolute nod. “Let’s save some ponies.”
Fluttershy was content to allow him to take the lead now. She followed close behind, eyes constantly scanning for signs of enemies. Tapping him on the flank she nodded a head, tapping the stone three times with a hoof. Three enemies nearby.
Shining nodded and activated his own detect evil magic. Sidling around the corner the elder paladin cleared his throat firmly. “One of two things is going to happen here gentlemen. You’re going to drop those poor excuses for weapons and surrender, or my squire and I are going to sent you howling to the pits of Tartarus. The choice is yours.”
It was almost funny how shocked the dogs looked at the pair of ponies’ sudden appearance. Scrambling to their paws they rapidly drew their own blades. “We beat you once stupid pony! We beat you twice!”
Fluttershy looked confused a moment. “How did they beat you m’lord?”
Shining snorted. “They snuck up behind me and clubbed me in the back of the head. I wouldn’t call that defeating me.” Turning his attention back to the dogs he scowled. “What’ll it be fleabags?”
Snarls of rage were their response as the dogs threw themselves forward. Even armed there were only two ponies after all, and they were much smaller to boot. The first thrust his spear at Shining Armor, the experienced knight barely flinching as he shifted his shield into the way of the thrust. The flimsy spearhead snapped in half, then the shaft followed suit causing the dog to stumble and land prone at Shining’s hooves.
The stallion reversed his grip on his sword and slammed the pommel into the back of the beast’s head, knocking it unconscious. By then the second dog was upon him, wielding a pair of wickedly curved daggers with much greater skill than his fellow. Fluttershy was about to intervene when the third dog charged at her. She released a strangled yelp and skipped backwards as the brute brought down a heavy club on the spot she’d just occupied, cracking the stone.
It was all well and good to SAY she was ready for combat, but suddenly being thrust into a life or death situation was terrifying. The dog seemed to be a flurry of club and claws, something always rushing in to swat or batter at the beleaguered mare. The more he pressed his attack however, the more her confidence grew. In comparison to sparring with Captain Spitfire, or her training with Sir Shining Armor the dog’s clumsy swings were almost too easy to read. She began to block and parry with more ease, soon she was pushing him back.
Shining Armor had already dispatched his second foe, and at first turned to help his squire, only to find it was the dog who needed help. The normally timid pegasus was darting in dealing quick jabs or bashes with her shield, drawing pained yelps from the dog. After blocking his club with her shield and shoving him back hard, his guard was wide open and she lunged in with a powerful thrust. Her blade passed through his chest easily, and she looked nearly as surprised as the rapidly dying diamond dog did.
Fluttershy stepped back quickly, pulling her sword from the dying creature, staring at it in quiet contemplation. She delicately stepped around the spreading pool of blood coming from the dead dog. “...we should keep going sire.”
Shining Armor nodded slowly. “Right. That was some excellent blade work Fluttershy, I’m proud of you.”
“Th-thank you sir… I just… I killed him. It was so easy… effortless almost.” Her voice was quivering a little. “M’lord I… I don’t…”
Shining Armor laid a hoof on her shoulder. “Fluttershy you did what you had to do. Taking a life is never easy… emotionally I mean. Physically that did look pretty easy, yeah.” He cracked a smile, seeing that his squire wasn’t returning it he cleared his throat. “But it should never stop hurting when we have to do that. I know I don’t like it, Captain Spitfire doesn’t like it and I have a sneaking suspicion your father doesn’t like it.”
Fluttershy took a shuddering breath and closed her eyes tightly, suppressing the tears that wanted to flow. “You’re right sir. We… we do this so nopony else has to don’t we?”
He nodded. “We do. We have to be strong for them. For the sake of everypony in Equestria.”
Resolute again Fluttershy stood at his side. “I can be strong sir.”
His smile was warm. “I know Fluttershy, we’ve known that all along. We were just waiting for you to realize it.”
For the first time in her life… Fluttershy felt it too.
***
The chieftain of the diamond dog tribe of the Everfree was a towering monster of a beast. Rumor was he was half ogre, or had an ogre somewhere in his ancestry at the very least. The gleaming blade clutched in one fist looked comically tiny in his huge paw. The sharply barbed whip he held in his other was significantly less ridiculous, at least to the ponies on the receiving end of it.
“Work ponies! No sleep! No lay down! Just work! Work til you die!” Bringing the whip back, he selected a faltering earth pony mare. Snapping his wrist forward he sent the cruel weapon arcing out at the hapless pony. His eyes went wide as saucers as a pegasus mare leapt from above, her sword cleanly slicing the whip in half, sending the front half flopping to the ground.
“What? What is this?! Free pony? Ponies slave! Not have swords! That bad pony!”
He only grew further incensed as a second pony leapt out. The prisoner from the hut no less. “You! You not take knife back! Is mine!”
Shining Armor scowled. “I’ll deal with the leader, you get these ponies free and keep an eye out for more dogs!”
Fluttershy nodded as she set to work following his orders. She tried to tune out the sound of the fight behind her, trusting in Shining Armor to deal with the leader. Rushing to the side of the nearest group of slaves she brought her finely honed sword up, and swung it into the chains binding them. The tempered steel easily sheared through the rusty iron chain, and the first group of ponies were already working to free themselves.
Turning to the second group she drew up short as a pair of dogs rushed her. Chanting a swift prayer to Lady Celestia, she felt magical strength surge through her limbs as her muscle visibly swelled. The dogs’ eyes widened as the little mare suddenly became a significantly less little mare and glared them down. “Drop your weapons and leave now!”
Looking from the furious, and bulky pony before them, then over to their boss who was struggling with a second one… and finally to the group of recently freed slaves behind the mare their choice was simple. Dropping their weapons they fled, howling all the while.
Blowing out the breath she’d been holding Fluttershy moved from group to group, working to free the slaves. Thankfully her magically enhanced muscle deflated soon to her normal, svelte physique. It was great for intimidation but it sure made it harder to get around. Looking about in satisfaction at all the newly freed ponies, she turned her attention back to Shining Armor.
She was alarmed to find the stallion’s sword had broken, and the only reason he was still alive was the brightly shining magical shield enveloping him. Her sire was definitely no wizard, but rumor had it he’d come from a magical pedigree and had developed and mastered a spell all his own. Wizard’s called it “Shining’s Aegis” in honor of the stallion who’d created it. The shield was supposed to be able to withstand nearly any assault, but Shining Armor’s sword was powerfully enhanced as well. Already tiny cracks were showing in the shield.
Snapping her wings open she took to the air. Gaining altitude she glanced down, fear gripping her heart as Shining’s shield finally shattered into glittering pieces. Banking sharply she angled downward and dropped into a reckless dive aiming for the massive diamond dog. “Leave him… alone!” Her blade burst into brilliant white radiance as she channeled her fury into it. The dog looked up with a dim expression of surprise on his face. An expression that would forever be frozen on the abruptly decapitated head as Fluttershy brought her sword cleanly through his neck and out the other side at the end of her dive.
She hit the ground solidly on all fours just as the dog’s body slumped over to the side and boomed into the ground. Breathing heavily the mare hurried to her sire’s side. “Are you alright m’lord?”
Shining Armor beamed with pride. “I am Fluttershy, thanks to you. And so are a lot of other ponies today.”
Already the freed slaves were crowding around the pair, cheering for their saviors. Fluttershy’s natural dislike of crowds was starting to rear its head again and she shuffled uncomfortably under the praise heaped upon her. As the knights lead the ponies from the mine, she couldn’t help but gaze back at the huge monster she’d felled, a look of sadness in her eyes.
***
“It’s with great pride that I name you Dame Fluttershy, a fully realized knight of the realm of Canterlot, and Paladin of the Order of Radiance. May you bring honor to yourself, your lord, and your country so long as you live.”
Fluttershy’s head was bowed in embarrassment at the wild cheering coming from her fellow paladins. Captain Spitfire grinned at the end of her speech leaning in close. “I knew you had it in you kid.”
Shuffling a little in her gleaming plate mail, Fluttershy’s smile grew a little at that. She scanned the crowd looking for one particular face. She wasn’t disappointed.
Sir Bright Wing the Bold was still an imposing stallion, even well into middle age. Standing a good deal taller than many of his fellows, his brilliant golden armor drew plenty of eyes. If any thought his bright pink mane a touch on the feminine side, none were bold enough to comment on it. His eyes were wet with unshed tears of pride as he watched his daughter pass into true knighthood.
Fluttershy stuck around the party long enough to be polite, before excusing herself and following after her father. “H--hello sir.”
His smile was warm and inviting. “Hello Fluttershy. I’m very proud of you. I know it hasn’t been easy for you, and that at times you wished to be somewhere else. I also knew however, that this is where you belonged. And not because it’s what I did. You could have just as easily taken after your mother, and no doubt you’d have been a wonderful priestess.”
Fluttershy settled before her father, content just to be in his presence. “But you have a fire in your heart Fluttershy. Most of the time it’s a tiny ember, but I know that if stoked properly it would become a roaring blaze of righteous strength, powerful enough to protect all of Equestria. I expect to hear many great things about you in the near future my dear.”
Fluttershy sniffled a little and wiped a hoof across her eyes. “Thanks daddy…”
The powerful stallion enfolded the smaller mare in a fierce hug. “No matter what you do Fluttershy, I’ll always be there for you. I’ll always be proud of you.”
Fluttershy returned the embrace happily, not breaking it for some time. Finally her father stepped back and cleared his throat gruffly. “Well! A true paladin such as yourself probably doesn’t want to sit around doing nothing. I have your first assignment.”
The newly minted paladin’s eyes widened. “A--already?!”
Her father nodded slowly. “Yes. It’s an easy one, not to worry. Lady Celestia’s church is opening a new temple in a town called Ponyville. It borders the Everfree Forest, and she has personally requested you by name to be the temple’s official knight protector. It will only have a staff of three priestesses so the job shouldn’t be terribly difficult.”
Doing a little quick thinking the mare realized that she’d heard of the town, even better it was very near Zecora’s grove. Even closer than the Citadel. “Thank you dad. I won’t let you down!”
“You never could Fluttershy. Now go enjoy your party. Spend some time with your friends. You leave in the morning.” He finished with a crisp salute.
Eyes shining with tears again she did likewise. “Yes sir!”
Bright Wind watched his filly rush excitedly from the room, a smile playing upon his face. “They grow up so fast don’t they?”
“Mmm. Some of them do. Some of them never seem to grow up.” He turned a stern eye to the large mare who’d alighted upon his balcony. “Honestly Celestia, rocks to cake? You can’t find a better use of your time?”
The ancient archmage shot a dirty look at the phoenix as she calmly alighted on the stallion’s back. “Philomena! You ratted me out to Bright Wind?”
The archmage’s familiar cawed a mocking laugh, enjoying a small cookie offered by the pegasus stallion. “Why Fluttershy?”
Celestia’s look turned serious. “You always did prefer to get right to the heart of the matter didn’t you?” Sighing softly she turned away, gaze fixed on the rising moon.
“A darkness is stirring Bright Wind my friend. A powerful darkness I fear beyond even our formidable strength. The world needs new heroes, it needs the Elements once again.”
Bright Wind scowled. “Impossible! You know the elements are useless without-”
Celestia cut him off with a sharp nod. “New Elements of Harmony are needed Bright Wind.”
His eyes widened at the implications. “And you think…”
Celestia smiled softly, laughter dancing in her eyes. “I never think Bright Wind. I know. I always know.” The laughter faded as she looked to the moon again.
“...always.”
Fluttershy
Paladin:6 Lawful Good
Strength: 12
Dexterity: 14
Constitution: 14
Intelligence: 12
Wisdom: 16
Charisma: 16
Special Abilities
Aura of Good, Detect Evil at will, Smite Evil 1 per day, Immune to all diseases, lay on hooves, divine grace, aura of courage, turn undead
Favored Spells
Cure Light Wounds, Bless, Bull's Strength
Shining Armor
Paladin: 12 Lawful Good
Strength: 18
Dexterity: 10
Constitution: 16
Intelligence: 12
Wisdom: 14
Charisma: 17
Special Abilities
Shining's Aegis: Once per day per int mod, creates a shield that can absorb 1d10 damage per level
Favored Spells
Divine Favor, Shield Other, Prayer
Special Gear
Bright Fang: +3 Holy Longsword, Three times per day it may be used to dispel illusions and transmutations in a fifty foot radius.
I thought she was going to be a *shot*
Hehe! But really, awesome stuff :)
Yes! So. Awesome!
Wow Fluttershy puts Rainbow Dash to shame. In fact she would make a better cleric too.
I've seen Fluttershy the Druid before so seeing her as a Paladin in this is a nice change of pace.
I find this whole premise interesting, if only because there's a Pathfinder supplement team working on a pony book. In fact, the book is finished for the most part.
If you don't know what Pathfinder is, it's sort of D&D 3.75. It blends the best aspects of 3rd edition D&D with some of the good ones from 4e.
Awesome work once again! Great way you gave Fluttershy the motivation she needed to do what she had to. Can't wait to see how she develops in the story, it shall surely be most fascinating. Can't wait for the new chapter, hope it's not too fsr away.
I like Fluttershy as a paladin. It can make more sense than the druid everyone makes her. sure her interests align well with druids, but her nature can lend itself well to paladins. Didn't expect to see SA right off the bat, but its not unwelcome and he's clearly a paladin. Enjoyed the chapter. Its nice to see a well written paladin. they're a fun class
so, we have:
twilight sparkle, with applebloom as her apprentice, and spike as a drake.
rainbow dash as a berserker cleric.
and now fluttershy as a paladin.
i fucking love this shit! i can't wait to see the others!
MAN! I was gunna write something similar to this. Ya beat me to it, I suppose I added this to my Read Later, it sounds entertaining :D
This is what I heard during the conversation between Flutters and her dad:
You're going to do great things one day.
Aww, thanks dad-
AND HERE'S ONE OF THEM!
i must say i like the way your sending these out. i mean most people would have amde fluttershy the cleric, it's fitting but it's cliche.
i like the way you think. can't wait to see the next one.
Why are they all so completely overpowered? It almost seems as if all Twilight has to do is realize her ability with healershy and already there is no obstacle that can withstand their group...
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And a better barbarian.
So, wait. Fluttershy ISN'T the reclusive druid?
This just keeps getting more and more interesting...
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...The Elements of Harmony, perhaps?
Plus, it's very possible to roll an above average set for your character, just as it's possible to roll an abysmally low set. I think it'd be off if they were all average or below, y'know?
I find the concept of Fluttershy as a Paladin exceptionally fitting - perhaps moreso than any other member of the Mane Six would be in the same role - because she's the right kind of Paladin. He who does not fear his own sword hath not the right to wield it.
Similarly, I'm very glad that you dealt with the topic of killing the way that you did. The act of taking a life leaves a scar that never truly fades, nor should it. I had been a little concerned that this story was going to be too dark for my tastes, but now that I've read this part of the prologue I have a feeling it's on its way to my top favorites,
Nice chapter. any chance we get to see shiny's stats?
Praise, praise, praise. Globs of it, all over the place!
You know how hard this is going to be to clean up? And how quickly I'm gonna have to clean it?
Once it gets into the upholstery, it'd be easier to throw away the furniture and buy new.
My bedroom aside, this is more good work. I haven't had this much...fun with a 'book' since reading the Wheel of Time series. I really like Flutter-knight but, theoretically, one could conceive of a way to turn her into nearly anything.
Also, you're going to have to change the description now, since she's not really a druid. Or is that character-development in-planning?Oopsies.
The Wonderbolts as a Knightly Order, with Fluttershy as a fledgling member?The Citadel of Light? Awesome.
Ooo, and Shining Armor as well, makes sense.
Awesome is the only word i can think of for this. Great work i'll be expecting more. I also can't wait to see what you do with the others especially Pinkie Pie.
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Wait so does that mean Zecora is going to be the timid druidess that tags along with our merry band of characters? I've already abandoned my old assumptions as it stands so I wouldn't be surprised.
...Gah never mind I'm confused.
That was great!
Don't paladins get an additional use of Smite Evil at level five?
You Magnificent Bastard!!
I... I thought she was gonna be a druid! That's what I would have had her as. But I actually like this. I feel it's out of her character, but not very far, so it provides excellent opportunities for character development, so props for that!
Yessssssssss.
Y'know it's pretty hard coming up with some meaningful criticism here - I don't see anything particularly wrong with your technical writing skill (Grammar, spelling, and such) nor is there anything that really stands out plotwise (yet) as needing any real overhauls.
What I do sort of like is how I'm seeing some potential future clashes between Rainbow and Fluttershy regarding the willingness to resort to force and, most amusingly, it has the usual sides of that argument (paladin for, cleric against) completely reversed. heh.
Curious to see where you go with the others still. I mean yeah your summary text does list three currently unused character archetypes but... it's not like any of them can't be applied to pretty much any pony that remains if you wanted.
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On a similar note, is Bull's strength a lvl1 paladin spell? I could've sworn it was a lvl2.
Then again, you've probably taken even more liberties I'm not noticing so i can probably just shut up now.
Man, I really like the way you reimagined the main characters. They're quite different while still in character somehow. This is what awesome crossovers are made of ! It's already making me think about writing some kind of spin-of from that story. Not many fics do that to me.
Come on now, I wanna read the next three !
Now then, what about Special Mount ability that paladins get on level 5?
Ahem.
BigMac! By the power of light, I choose thou as my celestial steed! I totally want to build for Spirited Charge...if that's all right with you, I mean...
Also, technically paladins become immune to fear on lvl 3, getting Aura of Courage. I guess Fluttershy was busy practicing her healing(or swordplay) that day.
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Not exactly the direction I would have chose on this one, but still good enough to not lose hope! I'm eager for Rarity's story, along with AJ and Pinkie Pie! OH OH! Do Pinkie next! :D
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shes not supposed to be good that's her whole thing questioning if shes really cut out to be a cleric. :/
also if you want to play it like that of course a level 6 pally is a better cleric then a level 4 cleric. :/
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Thanks!
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Glad you liked!
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She would, but Rainbow Dash is a better up close fighter stat wise.
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I thought it'd be an interesting take on the character, while still keeping her somewhat herself.
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I Know what it is, just never looked it over too much.
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Rarity will probably be up tonight.
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It was either Shining Armor, or Soarin who was gonna be her sire.
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I think Applejack is going to raise just as many eyebrows as Fluttershy to be honest. I really like what I've come up with for her back story.
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Sorry! :o I hope you enjoy this'n however. XD
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Oh that wacky Celestia!
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Thanks! The wait won't be long lol
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When I have my PC's roll their stats I'm incredibly generous. They get to do 4d6, reroll any 1's and 2's, then drop the lowest. I'm firmly of the belief that the heroes should be heroic in all aspects, this means higher stats than average. They're not average people after all.
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I dumped the druid idea, replaced it with paladin. I changed the wording up top. XD
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It was important to me to have Fluttershy come into her own as a warrior, while remaining true to who she is at her core. Like Shining says, killing should never be easy but sometimes there's no other choice.
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Ask and ye shall receive!
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Fluttershy was almost the cleric, but I liked the idea of taking one of the characters WILDLY out of her element like I did with Dashie.
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Thanks! The Wonderbolts as the top of the line paladins just popped in my head as I was writing the chapter lol
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Pinkie is PROBABLY gonna be last.
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Yeah Rarity was meant to be the third one, but Fluttershy's chapter was really screaming in my head to be written, so she got bumped up.
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Thanks!
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It's like level 7, I had to open the book to look up all their abilities lol
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I thought so too! But the more I thought about it, the more I didn't like it. I'm taking most of the cast and giving them very different roles than one would expect, then sorta pigeon holing Fluttershy.
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There's going to be plenty of inner conflict. Especially with AJ, Rarity, and Flutters.
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It is, Fluttershy sorta picked up a spell early. Oops!
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Soon!
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Yeah I kinda glossed over the special mount ability. XD
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I'm working on Rarity now. Probably AJ then Pinkie after. :x
This is starting to build a good reputation for amazing chapters but I did run into a small issue, sire. In the way you use it I belive it means father but in context it means lord, her sire as in belong to her I belive would mean it to be her father, where as you would say "yes sire". But I may be completely wrong.
Here is a funny fact I though Flutters had two fathers. You and your damn use of the word sire.
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And... you're losing me a bit. FLuttershy, the Element of Kindness... taking a life? Well, I guess since this is a more violent world, but you really need to have her be more broken up about it for it to pass muster.
3284770 May you be gifted with Cayden Cailean's own favourite brew! Somehow I entirely missed that. Much thanks, fellow Pathfinder fan! My friend on here, Nealend86, has actually made some pretty good homebrew rules for 3 Sorcerer Bloodlines, one for each pony type.
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Sire does mean father usually, however it can also be used to refer to a male authority figure, though such usage is somewhat archaic. Watch/read stuff set in a roughly medieval time period and you'll usually end up hearing a lord/king referred to as 'sire' at least once in a while, though usually as a response to an order.
example:
King: Bring me wine!
Servant: At once sire.
I used to have a tablet.
I was reading this in bed as I waited for sleep to take me. I read the opening chapter and giggled at the exchange between Celestia and Twilight. Then I read the second one, absolutely fell in love with the portrayals of the ponies. Then as I finished this chapter and felt as though Flutters' flank-kicking potential had just been shown to me as if for the first time, I knew I needed more.
This is, for me, in a way is like meeting my favorite pastel ponies for the first time all over again. There's a solid nostalgia for the early days of the first season, but even that analogy fails because there's something even more to it. Neigh-immaculate writing, phenomenal story composition, a perfect grasp of the characters...words fail me. But even after reading the chapter I browsed the comments. And then I see
I hit the like and favorite and subscribe buttons like I have never done so before in my life. I may have hit them too hard and too frantically in my zeal.
I used to have a tablet.
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When the live taken is activly taking those of innocents, it is but a mere kindness to the fallen to repay the favor and right the wrongs commited by ultimate sentance.
Thats how lawfull good thinks.
I`m more chaotic neutral so forgive me if my beliefs on good and evil seem a bit mixed
Fluttershy the Paladin is awesome... it's not out of character, but at the same time allows for personal growth.
It could have easily gone the way of "Oh, she only uses non-lethal attacks and bludgeoning weapons," but that would have been nothing more than a crutch. An ogre with a club kills just as easily as a knight with a sword. Fluttershy gets the "with great power comes great responsibility" argument.
Right now she'll fight for her friends, but I can see her getting bogged down when the inevitable "just kill them" argument comes up and she wants to show mercy.
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Aha, from the looks of it, it is a lot more well thought out than I was gunna make it But then again, I've only played informal DnD where we mess around a whole lot xD Very awesome work, my friend!
3284476 Spike is a Pseudodragon, actually.
Well Twilight has the Improved Familiar Feat, cuz Pseudodragon are freaking hard to get as Familiars.
Or it could be another aspect of her Template, which i dub "Awesomesauce".
I've always seen Applejack as the Paladin while Fluttershy is the ranger. But this works
3286077 huh. cool!
You grabbed an idea, and dear lord, you've turned it into gold. I really hope you consider doing more than just the pilot with this approach and writing? The paladic approach of shield before sword here, its marvelous. Hands or hooves down, this is good stuff. I really look forward to how you are planning to twist the ways of both applejack and rarity now. Pinkie will be a treat regardless, but any worries about the previous two you mentioned in this is gone.
Oh, guess who rolled a 1!
Yay! Paladinshy the cuddly!
Huh. They're all quite strong so far. Twilight in particular is insanely overpowered, though. Dat special ability is a straight-up gamebreaker. By level 15, assuming that you haven't broken the game too hard as a level 15 Wizard yet, "Iron Body" in particular grants total immunity to Nonlethal Damage. Sure, it adds a spell failure chance, but that doesn't matter when you can cast infinite Time Stops with no consequences.
(Time Stop requires level 17, but infinite DnD spells is kind of silly no matter how one looks at it.)
Of course, if we're talking theoretical optimization, there are much, much worse things one can do with a wizard at much lower levels, but that's what I see right off of the top of my head.
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When I said 'errand', I actually meant 'take on an insurmountable obstacle to retrieve mystic item de jour that may, or may not, actually be there'.