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1toothkiller


i luv games

Comments ( 35 )

Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story?

The first and last thing I saw when I opened up the chapter was an embedded video of a Korn song.

edit: i just bit the bullet and read the whole thing. you shattered my expectations. it's somehow worse than i thought it'd be

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I bet he wrote this on his phone or something with auto-correct.

*Critiquing happens*

Well, that saved me a while! This sucks. End of story.

If only I was being paid to piss some many people off right now.

Gasp!
Ah...water! Pills!
Cardiac...arrest...pulling...in...

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No its just that u sounded as angry as crazy grandma with her broomstick.

Comment posted by JEFFERY8U deleted Aug 26th, 2014

I went over to my closet grab my lucky MW3 shirt. I'm already wearing my black jeans with my new Assassins Creed belt. I went to grab some socks and my steel toe boots and my old black faded Black Ops hat along with my shades and wallet . Today my friends went me to hang out with them so we decided to do it early Saturday morning. Its beginning to become fall here so i put on my black Five Finger Death Punch and fingerless gloves along with my winter camo style single sling backpack to carry some of my other stuff

i.imgur.com/iWKad22.jpg

Its mags not clips.

Kind of sloppy but keep trying.

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Knights of the 'something' table. It's a group we created to review bad stories. :yay:

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Sure! Anyone can join!

I'll even promote you to contributor! :pinkiehappy:

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>Lauren! I thought I told you not to bring random people over here!

Her thirst for vengeance knows no bounds.
If she can't have control over FIM, NOBODY can.

Well if you like this story then keep writing it and don't care what others say about it.

No...

WHY YOU END IT HERE!!!

Grammar sucks! Not reading this shit, my eyes hurt!

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