Nice.

Oh. FIRST! I get perks for this being the first editor here.

Well, I'll be second then. Before I go into this, I do have to say that you did misspell some thing in the description. first off: "sensual", not "sensural", "abnormal": not "abnormale", "month" instead of "mouth", and finally: "he's unsure" and not "he unsure"
I hope this helps

3831773 I do wish i could get an editor for these descriptions. Thanks Chief.

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If you want one, then I could help be your editor. The only thing that I ask is that you try out my story, and even if you don't like it, then I will still edit your stories if you want to. One thing, though; I really don't do random stories, or really dark or sad ones, but others I believe I will be ok with.

3831805 Ok, just give me a link and I'll check it out.

You misspelled lewd in the description.

>Big Mac inflation
>Eenope

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Here you go, my story, Gateway of the Eyes

3831819 It's not inflation. Inflation is when your filled up with air or some liquid. Macro is when you become a giant like Godzilla. This fic isn't for everyone, but this first chapter features normal non fetish sex with Zecora. The rest will get kind of crazy.

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Macro usually isn't my thing, but this was pretty good. You would definitely benefit from an editor. Hope to see more!

3831948 Thanks. I tried ease the fetish stuff instead of slamming the reader with it all at once. I figured it would ease people in better, and make the build up for the macro freaks even sexier. I'm hoping I can lean from this story so that I can branch out.

I will be saving this for later reading, but in the description, you 'write' something. 'Wright' is a person (eg; The Wright Brothers).

love it hope it continues

I this story already. I want to see what happens next. I WANT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

3834379 That's great. School starting up again next week so its going to be tough. Also, I have several on going series that probably won't end anytime soon. No matter what I do I'm going to keep people waiting it seems. This next segment may be tough to right, since I will undoubtedly get aroused by own righting. One of the curses of righting about your own fetish fantasy I guess.

In the meantime, I have ton of SFW stories. My personnel recommendation are The New Boss, My Mortal Big Brother, And Putting Here Heads Together.

Macintosh you fool!!!!
HAVE YOU LEARNED NOTHING FROM TRYING TO COMPLETE THE HUGE QUEST!?

3835654 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PTuf-dq1Umw

Geez. All these comments about the grammar. I got news for you guys. I edited the first 2/3 of this but the last part I didn't. It was added in after I got done with what was already written. Then there's the description. Didn't edit any of it either. Perhaps I should look everything over for Dash Attack. You do NOT want to know what it looked like before I got a hold of it...

3839443 No worries man. The description is fine now, and that last bit can't be that bad. If it is, I'll make those changes on my own. For now, I'm just really glad people are liking the story.

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BUT WHAT ABOUT THE ATROCITIES, AND THE CHILDREN, AND THE CRIMES AGAINST PONYKIND IN ORDER TO FIGHT EVIL!?
NO AMOUNT OF PERFECTLY HUGE AND KAWAI FACE IS WORTH THAT PRICE!!!!!

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THE HUGE WILL DESTROY US ALL!!!!!!!

3850448 May be. But Its one that must be completed if Big Mac has any hope of out Hudgeing the Hudgest.

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YOU'VE DOOMED US ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MACINTOSH SHALL CONSUME THE EARTH!!!!!
THE STARS!!!!!!
GALAXIES!!!!!!!
AND THEN BEYOND!!!!!!!!
CAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPSSSSSS LOOOOOOOOCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!

hope to see more soon! and the potion requiring the drinker to have a kind heart for the potion to actually work is a great touch and actually sounds like some you'd hear from the show

I hope to see this continued. I like it.