That was a bit... sadistic of you to finish this fic like this. Any plans for a sequel?

Aw man, it's over already?

Nice ending, now I have the image of Celestia being dommed by Chrysalis up the ass... I like this.

Feel bad for her agents though, poor bastards.

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Not planning a sequel at the moment. Sorry.

I never intended to draw this out too long. I've planned this ending from the start and while I could have maybe added another chapter or two, it would have just needlessly convoluted the story. Sometimes it's best to quit while you're ahead.

A well executed , to make an awful joke.

“Either by treaty or strength of arms, I'm gonna make Celestia my bitch. And she's gonna like it, when I slowly fuck her up the ass.”

write a fic about this. probably as a sequel to this. Heck, get all the royalty in on it.

This was hilarious! I loved it!
Very well done, and a true demonstration of Chrysalis' political power.

Very clever Chrissy. Very clever indeed.

That's a nice thought to end with... The Solar goddess getting ramrodded and impaled on Chrysalis's morphed genitals. Sounds like a job for a clop writer! Any takers?!

BRILLIANT! Such beautiful work from a beautiful mind. I am proud to call you a friend, and to have had this idea put to words by you. You're a better writer then I am when it comes to the "naughty", as it were. Bravo. A spectacular job.

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I was given a great prompt to work off.

well Chrissy dosint lack ambition

Absolutely awesome, loves the charecterisation of Chrissy. Holding out for a sequel, but you know you're done it well when they're holding out for more.

Okay, where's the sequal. Where's the Golden age. Where's that promise of Celestia being Chrysalis' bitch?

This is such a gloriously fucked up story! I LOVE IT! HAHAHAHAHAH!!!

That was awesome. And i love how Chryssie might go for peace without going soft.

Though it'd be nice to find out why the changeling relations with ponies decayed in the first place.

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Okay, that was a pretty epic ending. Kudos for having Chrysalis go for a peaceful solution to an invasion of Equestira while still being a rather horrible person.

A vote will be held to grant her majesty emergency powers to resolve this war.”

So, Chrysalis is Palpatine? I'm OK with that.