Everyone bullied Daisy Shining Starr E'merald Sapphire becuz shes super pretty and smart and their jealous, but then Daisy gets turned into a unicorn and goes to Equestria and yeahhh!!!!!! this is her adventure!!!!
Everyone bullied Daisy Shining Starr E'merald Sapphire becuz shes super pretty and smart and their jealous, but then Daisy gets turned into a unicorn and goes to Equestria and yeahhh!!!!!! this is her adventure!!!!
This reminds me of MyOcCassandraIsBestPony, or whatever the name was.
Omaigud! This is so Kawaii! Moe-moe sugoi sugoi desu ka!
i do'nt spek japnse so dnt askk m3 abut it. :3
10/10
3265357 It's becoming harder to tell on this site if someone's a troll or for real.
dis maid me crai
Why do I find this amusing???
OHMIGAWD!!!
U DIDNT TELLME U MAD ASTORY!!11!!11!!
THSIS SOO GOODU!!
I LOVEIT!
OMIGOWD U SHOLD PUT MY OC SKYMAGMA RUBY-LAVA IN IT!!!!!!! SHE CAN B BESTESTESTESTS FRENDS WITH DISY!!!! IL SEND U A PM ABUT HERRRRR!!!
THIS SI SOOPER AMZING AND SHLD B FATURED RITE NOWWWW!!!
Look at all those deleted comments
Well...you can't...but you know what I mean
...Did you perchance read My Immortal before writing this?
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Wait! I think it's trying to communicate! Someone get a translator!
But I don't see why this should be featured. This story sucks. I dare say it's the worst I've ever read.
Unlikable and obvious wish-fulfilling self-insert Mary Sue gets shipped to Equestria and becomes instant friends with Princess Celestia. Yeah, that's a strong, original plot.
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Amen, my friend. Author is either a troll or an idiotic five-year-old girl high on apple juice with the mental maturity and attention span of a gnat.
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This is the best comment I have read in a long time.
You fucked up.
3312090 Really, I'm surprised anybody could even consider the latter. I've never once met someone so dim that they'd actually write a story of this tier. That's beyond thought.
Besides, this is the best fanfiction I've read since Fallout Equestria (joking {and I'm not happy that I feel the need to elaborate it was a joke}).
... this chapter sucks more balls than Knighty. And that's saying something.
No wonder you "faled engilsh"
You're doing it wrong.
You're supposed to call us "preps", you're goffik and you have to continually misspell your OC's name. It's almost like you want us to believe that instead of a troll you're just some kid writing really really really really really really really really really shitty fanfiction. But you tipped your hand too soon and there's nothing you can do to change that.
I would suggest creating a new account and starting a completely new troll from there.
Don't be so hating guys, this is pretty good for a 6-year old.
But at least let me help you out.
This should be:
See? It's not that hard.