• Member Since 8th Sep, 2012
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ZemaBato


I do a lot of reading and lurking. I also write stuffs. I may or may not look like Krillin.

Comments ( 5 )

Okey Dokey...I haven't read read but just pointing out the there IS a Doctor Whooves tag...:twilightblush:

I like this, but, the story seemed a bit too straight forward.

3220503

Nah, you're fine. I chose not to pic the Doctor Whooves tag on purpose, since there's no tag for the *human* Doctor. If that makes sense.

3220518

Well, that's because it is. What you see is what you get, more or less. :twilightsheepish:

It seems good so far, it just kinda escalated REALLY quickly; as if it were being rushed.

3236066

Thanks. I didn't intend for this to be any sort of epic, as you can clearly see. It was more of a "introduce characters and OHGODTHINGSPICKEDUP" sort of deal. Or you can think of it as quick and dirty, with the first chapter being quick, and the second being dirty.

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