Time Dash

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While investigating an old class mate for potential cheating, Rainbow Dash uncovers a secret that will change her life forever.

(Editing was a little rushed, but it should still be good, I hope you like it)

Chapters (7)

Chapter One: “The Finish” · 12th Sep 2013 · 1,555 words
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Chapter Two: “The Investigation” · 12th Sep 2013 · 2,952 words
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Chapter Three: “Missing” · 12th Sep 2013 · 2,767 words
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Chapter Four: “Changes” · 12th Sep 2013 · 2,085 words
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Chapter Five: “The Beginning” · 12th Sep 2013 · 2,215 words
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Chapter Six: “The Double Rainbow Paradox” · 12th Sep 2013 · 2,153 words
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Epilogue: “We're Just Getting Started” · 12th Sep 2013 · 235 words
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Hypothermia

Hypothermia #1 · Sep 12th, 2013 · · · Chapter Two: “The Investigation” ·

Oh, RD just got Benjamin Button'd. Well, this should be fun.

Hypothermia

Hypothermia #2 · Sep 12th, 2013 · · · Chapter Four: “Changes” ·

Well, this immediately veered into territory I wasn't expecting, and then veered away from that just as fast.

Reminds me of Gatchaman, where a game changing plot twist seemed to happen almost every episode. At least in the beginning, I didn't finish the series.

Hypothermia

Hypothermia #3 · Sep 12th, 2013 · · · Epilogue: “We're Just Getting Started” ·

What the hell just happened?

Scorch Xi

Scorch Xi #4 · Sep 12th, 2013 · · · Epilogue: “We're Just Getting Started” ·

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If you're refering to the ending you won't understand it unless you have read the rest of xzhackers stories. BreakDown in particular

Monochromatic Rainbow

Monochromatic Rainbow #5 · Sep 12th, 2013 · · · Chapter Three: “Missing” ·

So... Rip Van Winkle on steroids?

Xz Hacker

Xz Hacker #6 · Sep 13th, 2013 · · · Epilogue: “We're Just Getting Started” ·

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You know I've been meaning to watch this, although I don't get the comparison.
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Breakneck pace change, its kinda my signature writing style. I'm a roller coaster baby!!!
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As my good friend Scorch explained, its a reference through-back to the ending of my story Breakdown, and Discord's Resignation. (They are kinda linked, sorta, they will be shut up)

Xz Hacker