A young mare on the run for her dear life, she just regained her freedom but her life is in danger. And so anyone who try to help her, associated in any ways. Will she able to get through this mess alive or be ripped shreds by the cult.
I feel like agent from Matrix as mowed down the minigun wielding neo ^^;
I know my grammar is bad, being english my second language. I do like share the story which born in my head, and if like to help would be brilliant. I do use spell checker software, but it's far cry from perfect.
3309056 I can see that you're having trouble, with even your comments being a little hard to read. I'll get onto this as soon as possible.
Edit: Granted however I will have trouble with the formatting...
Edit: I've begun the editing! Photo Finish: Time to make de magicks! Anyway, here's the link CLICK HERE I've allowed ONLY COMMENTING as others will see this link and it's the best way for people to assist me in helping you while you still have access to edit my editing as you please. Lol
Edit: I've placed comments throughout the document in areas that I found were a problem. Also, if possible 3199136, could you possibly help me with this?
3313141 Okay. BTW, I went back to edit some more and laughed, there were other people looking at the document, anons and Google Users alike. NOT THAT I CARE THAT ANY OF YOU ARE LOOKING AT IT! It's just funny!
Oh god. So many comments. This story is a great challenge. No offense. Just don't forget to check in on the edit every once in a while as I need confirmation on various things. Just read the comments, there's nothing more than that. When I've finished the whole thing, however, you'll need to read through it to make sure I've gotten things correct. Unless you'd rather start straight away...
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I feel like agent from Matrix as mowed down the minigun wielding neo ^^;
I know my grammar is bad, being english my second language. I do like share the story which born in my head, and if like to help would be brilliant. I do use spell checker software, but it's far cry from perfect.
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I can see that you're having trouble, with even your comments being a little hard to read. I'll get onto this as soon as possible.
Edit: Granted however I will have trouble with the formatting...
Edit: I've begun the editing! Photo Finish: Time to make de magicks!
Anyway, here's the link
CLICK HERE
I've allowed ONLY COMMENTING as others will see this link and it's the best way for people to assist me in helping you while you still have access to edit my editing as you please. Lol
Edit: I've placed comments throughout the document in areas that I found were a problem. Also, if possible 3199136, could you possibly help me with this?
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I've just read what you edited so far and looks sweet
I wil update the first chapter in a bit
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Okay. BTW, I went back to edit some more and laughed, there were other people looking at the document, anons and Google Users alike. NOT THAT I CARE THAT ANY OF YOU ARE LOOKING AT IT! It's just funny!
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Guess entertaiment asured But it is on FiM already, up to people to see so no difference really, except it be better at the end grammar wise
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I doubt I've fixed all the mistakes. But I did the best I know how.
Edit: I'll look at your other stories as well... See if I can help on those too.
Oh god. So many comments. This story is a great challenge. No offense. Just don't forget to check in on the edit every once in a while as I need confirmation on various things. Just read the comments, there's nothing more than that. When I've finished the whole thing, however, you'll need to read through it to make sure I've gotten things correct. Unless you'd rather start straight away...
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Hm. I just thought of something. What spell-check software do you use?