Yeah there is really just a lot of grammar mistakes. To busy typing with your left hand (do you know what I mean). They are small so one or to revisions should quickly fix that.
well, I don't really want to wait for the next chapter and would like for you to get it out as soon as possible, but life does seem to be a bother sometimes with stories. Taking away our time to work on em. but maybe you should put chapter 4 in the sunlight for awhile.
Mind control is hot, but the sheer density of grammar errors made me want to burst into treats.
That's two. I hope Twilight is next, we wouldn't want our lovebirds to be seperated for long, would we?
cant wait for the next chapter!!!!
more please
Yeah there is really just a lot of grammar mistakes. To busy typing with your left hand (do you know what I mean). They are small so one or to revisions should quickly fix that.
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fluttershadow is ............. actually pretty horrifying
I love this story, keep up the good work. :)
Time to read brain. ACTIVATE BITCH!!!
Now all we need is drunken Trevor and a helicopter and it would be perfect.
Fluttershadow looks so cute and deadly!!!!!
Nice job. That's all I have to say.
Please make more
Next is Applejack, then Rainbow Dash, and lastly Twilight.
Whatever happened to Spike?
This story is pretty good when's chapter 4 coming out?
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Mostly season 3 in general.
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Still working on it, might be a while before that chapter sees the light of day...
well, I don't really want to wait for the next chapter and would like for you to get it out as soon as possible, but life does seem to be a bother sometimes with stories. Taking away our time to work on em. but maybe you should put chapter 4 in the sunlight for awhile.
What is the story's original name, and can you supply a link to it.
MOAR! I REQUIRE MOAR!
Who is betting this story is dead?
Update, man, update! Your fans demand it! Update Want her, love her, need her! To while your at it!
So are we assuming that spikes dead?just curious.