Pinkie is throwing yet another party, and this time, she's pulled out all the stops. The cupcakes, the treats, the party games and the guests, even a big musical number; everything is of the best Ponyville has to offer. However, one pony in particular isn't happy about the party. Not one bit...
Will Pinkie Pie be able to reconcile with Fluttershy? If so, how will their relationship blossom?
Hilarity, d'aww, trademark Pinkie Pie randomosity, and tasteful breakage of the fourth wall...
Chapters (2)
Most of this song will be featured in Chapter 2, so if you enjoyed it...feel free to wait for the next chapter. There will be however, a minor interruption during the song...
I love the premise, and I--surprisingly--really enjoy the song. The lyrics are good and fit with Pinkie, and that song is perfect for Pinkie. Solid work and worth the track.
260512 Yay! Feedback! This being my first story and all, your complements mean a lot to me. Now, let's see if I can procrastinate on procrastination long enough to knuckle down and make some headway into chapter 2!
Well written and delightfully lighthearted so far. Tracked.
This is really good
Oh, another shipfic? Yeah, that's cool and al- wait, it's Pinkieshy?
Instant-track.
Tracking. This seems interesting
Tracking because of PinkieShy. Ill read it a bit later though. Pinkie Promise!
261452 Oh you.
Don't forget the feedback. I can't consciously make an effort to give ponies what I don't know they want!
Couldn't sleep... so I read it. I'm interested in how Fluttershy will react to a party for her.
I liked this line!
And so it happened that this pink, poofy maned panache pony pranced peculiarly towards the town library.
And now to play everyone's favorite fan fic game... the Waiting Game!
Looking forward to it bro!
261526 I say "Huzzah" :lunahuzzah: for excessive alliteration. Next chapter, depending on how much schoolwork I force myself to do, should be up sometime this week.
Looks good so far!
criticism... hmm...
Meh... nothing worth noting.
Tracking awaiting more.
Well, I am definently going to track, if only becuase I adore fluttershy and I really like Pinkie Pie, although why is everyone saying this is a ship fic? Did I miss it saying that in the description or something? It could just be Pinkie Pie throws big party, Fluttershy, being well SHY, gets upset at said party, Pinkie Pie does something to try and cheer Fluttershy up, but that only makes it worse and Fluttershy runs(gallops? Flies?) away, and Pinkie Pie puts it on herself to make it up to Fluttershy without being all romantical (Scientific word mind you) and stuff. All around a nice, heartwarming story. =) Yes... By the way, whats a ship fic? Like is shipping when you actually have them get together romantically, or can it be as slight as suggesting they may like each other?
265095 I know the author, and this IS a ship fic. Though I see your point.
And shipping is romance between two characters, in any form. It could be the big lead up, the fall of a relationship, or the climax. Or, for the really good ones, all of them.
265205 Thanks, Honestly whenever I picture a ship fic I can't help but picture Hearts and Hooves day, how Cheerilee and Big Mac treat each other, which frankly makes me sick. I am not against romance or anything its just too much romance is silly to me. Also one thing I can never really get over is the fact that it seems that pretty much every mane cast is almost always paired with another female, even though I realize that in the long run its either that or Big Mac for the most part >.< Anyways, I will keep reading as I do like this story so far.
266531 Yes, I agree that the Hearts and Hooves day thing is pretty dreadful. And also: of course, you're absolutely correct about the same gender pairing. I simply chose this coupling because of the WOEFULLY inadequate amount of decent Pinkieshy ships. Plus I find them both adorable, in opposing ways; which will be relevant later...
im pretty sure i dident do that song any where near how it was sopposed to be done
Just so you know, the video is listed as private.