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RobertPooner


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Ever since Princess Luna’s visit one year prior, Ponyville has become the Nightmare Night capital of Equestria. Ponies from all over come to join in the frightful revelry and to perchance catch a glimpse of their reclusive princess of the night. But when a strange stallion makes his appearance, will the night’s harmless fun take on a more sinister tone?

May need to up the rating for gore and blood in later chapters, we shall see.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 28 )

I like the idea so far :)

Have a like.

That tidbit at ending, wonder how Twilight will handle him.

Well that was pleasant...kind of?

And the plot thickens, moar please :)

Thanks guys, any constructive criticism is welcomed.

Oooooooooooooooooooooo. Plot thickens quickly, update soon :D

I have to wonder what Celestia and Luna will do once they see him hmm.

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

3521578 Na never even crossed my mind. perhaps if i get a little more feedback here id consider it, otherwise I am way too self conscious to ever do that lol

Now for AJ's response in next chapter...

3556967 Everypony loves cliff hangers though...

ZOMBALS

I, am pleased.
:pinkiehappy:

3561328 I try my best. If you're enjoying it, how bout a like everypony?

Celestia jumped the gun too quickly.

3865187 Out of ignorance perhaps?

so is nox a earth pony?

3868792 That he is, all will be explained in later chapters. As the old proverb says patience is a virtue.

What's in the northern wing?....

3909113 Patience my friend. Patience.

Thanks everypony for the faves. Feel free to comment, I'm open to any constructive criticism or other suggestions. This is my first story after all.

Plot thickens....

3910735

Me right now; that moment when you REALLY want to read but are too lazy to wait for the page to load on mobile....(yeah the comments loads first -_-)

3935969 I feel you, happens alot lol

Gasp, what happens now?!

(this chapter update didn't show up on my feed- strange.)

Update soon? o:

Sorry everyone. I meant to put this on hold for a bit. Work was hectic as well as juggling personal life and such, but I'll actually be posting regularly again toward the end of this week. Again my apologies :pinkiesad2:

Dun. Dun. Dun! I cant wait to see what Luna has to say.

Love the story so far, though you may want to fix the paragraphing on chapter 15 it is a bit difficult to read.

Will be there any update to this story?

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