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Hopeful_Ink_Hoof


[He/Him] Just a writer who likes MLP and hopes to make a living off it: https://ko-fi.com/ink_hoof

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Octavia is in jail and waiting to be bailed out. The good news is she has a friend who is willing to come bail her out. The bad news is that the prim and proper Octavia is not going to get out without a little teasing.

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Comments ( 14 )

I was a bit skeptical when I saw the story was complete at only 1,514 words, but I was not disappointed. Enough is explained, and what is left out of the story would only cause to drag it down if added. I like it!

It has few minor spelling and grammar errors, but in terms of characterization, plot (no pun intended), and comedy-I have to say-it didn't disappoint! :pinkiehappy:

A cute funny little fic. What's not to love?

uhhhhh:derpyderp1: the name is incorrect itis octavia PHILHARMONICA, hope that fixes any problems.

very good and short story

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Philharmonica is a headcanon name. Melody is from the toyline.

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wot?:twilightoops:
realy? i mean... should i tell them about the thing?
(nah, better they don't know)
sorry... i wish icould tell you more

This was an awesome story—clear, concise, and funny to boot. Good job. :moustache:

You've gotten a fave/follow/upvote from me.

Short, simple, nicely done. A well earned up.

I'm a little confused. It continually refers to Vinyl and Octavia as friends, but Octavia's description of what she would do if Vinyl got her out makes it sound as if they're romantically involved. Which is it?

I guess it doesn't matter in the context of this story which it is, but it still seems like a contradiction.

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Maybe they're Friends with Benefits.

Some people say Octavia's last name is Philharmonic but some people say that it's Melody. Why?
Great story by the way. It was funny.:rainbowlaugh:

7096761 As far as I know, the last name was created by the fandom in reference to The Boston Philharmonic, which is a popular classical orchestra. However, the last name Melody was used on some of the merchandise, such as the Funko vinyl collectible.

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