When Ponyville is in for a massive storm, Applejack and Pinkie Pie invite you to a slumber party with them at Sweet Apple Acres. As the night grows darker, you and the earth ponies find new things to do during your increasingly interesting party.
Best lines in this chapter imo "like a tank speeding through a hurricane. great imagery here.
Then this line but it's Pinkie possible! Very nice play on words and also sticking with the shows tendency to use alliterations like that.
Things I did not like "Yes, Applejack. Of course it's true." you infer. something about the way it ends. I thing using a different word then "infer" but that is all.
Best lines in this chapter imo "like a tank speeding through a hurricane. great imagery here.
Then this line but it's Pinkie possible! Very nice play on words and also sticking with the shows tendency to use alliterations like that.
Things I did not like "Yes, Applejack. Of course it's true." you infer. something about the way it ends. I thing using a different word then "infer" but that is all.
I loved the remark about the drunken pink horse soiling herself
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it must be hell to actually remember you name correctly
Game ain't "truth or stare", Sugarcube! Get to smackin'!
Of course. How do we improve a Pinkie Pie party? With games! With Truth or Dare! With paralytic pink horse! (Favourite line that, by the way)
Very pleased that AJ got some physical dares in this one. Even more so that she got a new cutie mark
Things are winding up to be interesting here on out. Nice build up
Loved the SpongeBob reference. I can actually see Pinkie doing that.