When Lyra tricks you, and swaps bodies with you, you soon find yourself in Equestria as Lyra. While that is bad enough, you soon find out that Bon Bon is very anxious to rekindle the spark in their lovelive
3282481 Not Bon Bon, Sweetie Drops. Sheesh... Now I've read a LOT of clop, and I'd rank this at #2 for the human-in-a-pony-body category. Very well done.
I must say, well written. Have to grin when the human found out his situation only got worse (or better? depends on the viewpoint ) Looking forward for more :3
Well... I was thinking about a long comment on how I surprisingly liked this fanfic (I mean, I'm surprised by my own extremly positive emotional reaction), but let me end it this way: you is the first wrighter that got a 'follow' from me. PS: Excuse me my English if I made grammar or spelling mistakes in this comment.
After reading this I wouldn't have been able to guess that this was your first time writing clop. Well written with some nice detail, I look forward to future chapters.
You have done me a kindness good sir. I've had an idea similar to this (male human lyra vs. kinky bon bon) and reading it in what i can only describe as 4-chan writing style was certainly a treat. Though personally Id at least give the poor dude a chance to run.
3500676 But there are no brakes on Bon Bon's rapetrain! Joking aside, fics not over yet, and will develop into a more romantic setting later down the line If only I had the time to write it :(
3505533 As always thank you good sir and I implore you on making time. Hell even I managed to churn out a chapter in a story today (that will probably never be read) so i know you can do it. Even with that pesky thing called "life" getting in the way.
"Keep your mouth shut not-lyra! Or a pornography starring you will be the second worst thing to happen to you today!"
I think that the fetishes are just going to get more extreme from here because main character guy doesn't know the safe word. My guess is that that was the only thing holding Bonbon back.
I thought you did a fine job. Keep at it, you've got a real gift for it.
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Not Bon Bon, Sweetie Drops. Sheesh...
Now I've read a LOT of clop, and I'd rank this at #2 for the human-in-a-pony-body category. Very well done.
I must say, well written. Have to grin when the human found out his situation only got worse (or better? depends on the viewpoint )
Looking forward for more :3
Well... I was thinking about a long comment on how I surprisingly liked this fanfic (I mean, I'm surprised by my own extremly positive emotional reaction), but let me end it this way: you is the first wrighter that got a 'follow' from me.
PS: Excuse me my English if I made grammar or spelling mistakes in this comment.
After reading this I wouldn't have been able to guess that this was your first time writing clop. Well written with some nice detail, I look forward to future chapters.
That was a rather unfortunate misspelling.
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Could have sworn I fixed that when it got pointed out at a certain imageboard :/ Oh well, thanks for pointing it out ^^"
Come on Lyra! You've already screwed the guy out of his life! You couldn't have at least made sure he could actually pass as you in your world?
Everyone's getting promoted.
You have done me a kindness good sir. I've had an idea similar to this (male human lyra vs. kinky bon bon) and reading it in what i can only describe as 4-chan writing style was certainly a treat. Though personally Id at least give the poor dude a chance to run.
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But there are no brakes on Bon Bon's rapetrain!
Joking aside, fics not over yet, and will develop into a more romantic setting later down the line
If only I had the time to write it :(
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As always thank you good sir and I implore you on making time. Hell even I managed to churn out a chapter in a story today (that will probably never be read) so i know you can do it. Even with that pesky thing called "life" getting in the way.
"Keep your mouth shut not-lyra! Or a pornography starring you will be the second worst thing to happen to you today!"
Intriuging. I wonder how the human turned Lyra will treat Bon Bon here?
Awkward romantic foreplay commence!
i wonder what other fetishes you plan to add to this. can't wait till the next chapter.
I think that the fetishes are just going to get more extreme from here because main character guy doesn't know the safe word. My guess is that that was the only thing holding Bonbon back.
...be disturbed...
I loved it all so much and can't wait to see what happens next.
what the everloving fuck is this.
my brain is dying from insanity.
I love how you detail "Lyra" slowly succumbing to pleasure and the weird sort of compromise-slash-acceptance growing in him.
And fuck me, that is kinky as shit. Wish I could've been there.