A highly sarcastic pony's attempts not to get eaten too much. Can Equestria handle the ferocious onslaught of bloodthirsty monsters?
*Contains high levels of cynicism*
This is my first posted story
please use constructive criticism cause hating gets nopony anywhere
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Is this Riddick done as a pony?
Pretty good. No major gripes. Liked and added to favorites.
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No, just with the creepy monsters
3102584 Bummer... cause I would LOVE to see Riddick done as a pony!
he is badass
a good chapter but i think the area of the story with clive was a bit rushed especially the decapitation scene also id recomend bit less luna
mindfuck
and more sorrow filled reaction 
“WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU SAYING! THIS CANNOT BE HAPPENING! HOLY-”
have you read any fic that use luna's old speech style cause it sound very good if done right
if you have not seen i will show you the power
is nice