A good start. Loved the part with Twilight, “Really? I thought this was a restaurant. Do you have special menu items or something?” that was amazing! Looking forward to more.

And away we go again!

Whoo hooooo!

~Skeeter The Lurker

This is shaping up to be better than the first one
Hope you update soon

Damn this is going to be very intresting.
I really can't wait for the next one.
And since comments seem to motivate you, why not a picture to top it all.
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And don't forget.
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She needs Turner's help? Er... ok? I'm not sure what she can do though, but as a minion, it's her job to do the dirty work like carry a big bag of bits away or throw herself at the "hero" to distract them while Madame gets her coupe de grace ready.

At least she doesn't have to wear goofy overalls, speak in some whimsical nonsense language, and look like a sorta-clone of the the other minions, heh.

Heh, eh...

Oh god, she's serious.

No. No! Anything but the goofy overalls!

Near the end.

"That or the were better actors"

The -> they?

Other than that keep up the great work, glad to see a sequel.

Clever. Well written. Interesting. Funny.
Everything I loved about the first story, again! Great job, keep it up!

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Or, what if Trick Turner has the ability to turn every superhero's and villain's tricks around and see through their disguise?

Definitely hooked on this concept - and the second one is definitely better than the first. You've improved! Keep going! I will you forever if you make a threesome with Twilight, Trick, and Madame. That would be epic.

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You mean the only pony in the entire city with... common sense?

But we both know (wink wink) that Trick Turner has nothing to do with turning around anyone's special abilities. If you know what I mean.

WRITE FASTER DAMN YOU! WEIGHT FASTER I SAY!

But srsly I neeeeed to know what happens next!

comments = faster writing? OMGOMGOMGOMG SPAM ALL THE GOOD VIBES!!!!! But seriously, this is a good read; I look forward to moar!

Needs an AU tag on this story.

This is gonna be sweet. Here's hoping for a sexy bank robbery.

Mother of Luna this is some sexy shit I can not wait for more I say good job and give this man a cookie now for is hard work
more more MORE MOAR!!!!!!!!!

This. Is. FABULOUS! We must have more darling!

3066958 Season 4 has a superhero episode though.....Doesn't it?

When's the next chapter? Looking forward to this.
I have also made fan-art. I'm an anthro artist so the drawing is of course anthro, even though the fic isn't. I really love it.
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Why isn't chapter two out yet? I need more! More I say! MORE!

It's been ten weeks and six days since I read this why you no update sir you let down all your fans plz...hurry with the update we really want more to read
(update)my god man why havnt you updated this yet!!! come on did something happen that won't let you make words for us?

3058513 "'Special menu items?' You could say that…"

This is a comment! You are now sustained. Now, spend every living breathing second writing!

I-is this story… dead?

It's not dead
IT'S REBORN ahhh Idk
I love the story though

*twitch* Why… Why hasn't this updated since before season four started? I guess the author just needs more motivation… This is a good story! You should totally write more! Bam! Motivation.

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Yeah, I know. So much potential. Like one of Pinkie's party cannons, only it's filled with spandex, scented oils, and french ticklers!

...oh, it's one of those parties...