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Kenny Shepard

Kenny Shepard #1 · Aug 13th, 2013 · · · Working Wonder's ·

Good story

archBlitzer

archBlitzer #2 · Aug 13th, 2013 · · · Working Wonder's ·

Yea not bad some mistakes but I don't care

Golden Diamond

Golden Diamond #3 · Oct 4th, 2013 · · · Working Wonder's ·

Dat Ending Sentence!

StormHoof32

StormHoof32 #4 · Oct 10th, 2013 · · · Working Wonder's ·

This is a good story, but something about it tells me your a first time writer, and I gotta say, for a first, this is actually pretty good, could use some work, but good none the less. i look forward to seeing how you progress through your writing. i'll be watching.

*insert creepy stalker staring face here*

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