• Member Since 9th Aug, 2013
  • offline last seen Oct 15th, 2015

unknown_paths


I love MLP and I love writing. Those 2 things have led me to becoming a fanfic writer. However, I don't know much. Therefore, I hope to learn alot while being on this site.

Comments ( 18 )

You deserve this favorite. Welcome to the herd brony!

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Don't know what a Brony is... but thanks!

3034967 A brony (or pegasister if you're female) is an adult or teen who likes the show My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.

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Oh ok, im a pegasister then. Thats cool, next chapter should be up soon.

:ajbemused: Hm....the style is good, and the story seems like it can be good but I kinda feel like the ending of the into was a bit...misplaced? At the moment it sounds more like one of those sample inserts in the backs of some books to whet the appetite but what is also shorter than the introduction. Like I said though, it was a good read, just too quick and too little substance to leave us with.:twilightsmile:

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Ill work on it, thanks for the feedback!
:pinkiehappy:

3043463 No problem, I'm happy to help. Can't wait to read more :yay:

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I should have the next chappy up by 5am?? Sometime in the morning...

3043488 sounds cool. Also, just let me know If you need help. I may not catch that many errors but I think I can look it over and catch a good number of things.

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Thanks! I just don't know how I would send it to you and stuff... im pretty new to writing fanfictions.

Just send it as a message on here and I could look it over and try to point out/correct things. Though I don't know if I'd get to the 5 a.m. one in time because I won't wave internet til late in the day tomorrow most likely.

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We 'll work something out! I wanna get to know you better, you are my first associate on this site.

3043588 sounds good to me. Either shoot me a message or ask away right here :pinkiesmile:

Well for a first story its good, the beginnings are always a bit hard to write with oc's(I should know my first story just came out) it looked good in spelling and grammar. The style is fine, I think not my own but still I have see it used before. So good job:twilightsmile:

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Thanks for the compliments! The 2nd chapter is up so... enjoy! :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

I like it. I wish it was a bit longer, but I like it. Also, I found out why I wasn't seeing your stuff.

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For some reason, "show mature" was turned off, fixed it though lol. :derpytongue2:
Are you okay?
(Sorry that I haven't been on, a lot has been going on :fluttercry: anyway, I look forward to the next installment.)

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