I love MLP and I love writing. Those 2 things have led me to becoming a fanfic writer. However, I don't know much. Therefore, I hope to learn alot while being on this site.
Wake up, go to work, be a human...but what if this all changed by the arrival of someone special? How much will change, and will it be a good change? Most of all, how important is your universe to you?
Doctor Whooves travels back in time with Alex, Derpy, And Rainbow Dash, to find out how the Elements of Chaos survived the defeat of Night Mare moon, and eventually made a comeback in the future.
When in the north, Rainbow Dash accidently awakens an ancient warrior from another land and helps him fit in and fulfill his destiny, but doesn't expect to develop feelings for him in the process.
When you are asked to appear at a convention; you think it's a normal one. Not me however because my invitation took me to magical horse land! Now I've got to deal with crazed fans and people that hate me for no reason. This isn't going to be fun.
After a disastrous falling out with the mare he cares about, Alex returns home to earth to clear his mind. But, you can only hide from the insanity of Equestria for so long before it comes looking for you.
Hm....the style is good, and the story seems like it can be good but I kinda feel like the ending of the into was a bit...misplaced? At the moment it sounds more like one of those sample inserts in the backs of some books to whet the appetite but what is also shorter than the introduction. Like I said though, it was a good read, just too quick and too little substance to leave us with.
3043488 sounds cool. Also, just let me know If you need help. I may not catch that many errors but I think I can look it over and catch a good number of things.
Just send it as a message on here and I could look it over and try to point out/correct things. Though I don't know if I'd get to the 5 a.m. one in time because I won't wave internet til late in the day tomorrow most likely.
Well for a first story its good, the beginnings are always a bit hard to write with oc's(I should know my first story just came out) it looked good in spelling and grammar. The style is fine, I think not my own but still I have see it used before. So good job
3147739 For some reason, "show mature" was turned off, fixed it though lol. Are you okay? (Sorry that I haven't been on, a lot has been going on anyway, I look forward to the next installment.)
You deserve this favorite. Welcome to the herd brony!
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Don't know what a Brony is... but thanks!
3034967 A brony (or pegasister if you're female) is an adult or teen who likes the show My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.
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Oh ok, im a pegasister then. Thats cool, next chapter should be up soon.
Hm....the style is good, and the story seems like it can be good but I kinda feel like the ending of the into was a bit...misplaced? At the moment it sounds more like one of those sample inserts in the backs of some books to whet the appetite but what is also shorter than the introduction. Like I said though, it was a good read, just too quick and too little substance to leave us with.
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Ill work on it, thanks for the feedback!
3043463 No problem, I'm happy to help. Can't wait to read more
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I should have the next chappy up by 5am?? Sometime in the morning...
3043488 sounds cool. Also, just let me know If you need help. I may not catch that many errors but I think I can look it over and catch a good number of things.
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Thanks! I just don't know how I would send it to you and stuff... im pretty new to writing fanfictions.
Just send it as a message on here and I could look it over and try to point out/correct things. Though I don't know if I'd get to the 5 a.m. one in time because I won't wave internet til late in the day tomorrow most likely.
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We 'll work something out! I wanna get to know you better, you are my first associate on this site.
3043588 sounds good to me. Either shoot me a message or ask away right here
Well for a first story its good, the beginnings are always a bit hard to write with oc's(I should know my first story just came out) it looked good in spelling and grammar. The style is fine, I think not my own but still I have see it used before. So good job
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Thanks for the compliments! The 2nd chapter is up so... enjoy!
I like it. I wish it was a bit longer, but I like it. Also, I found out why I wasn't seeing your stuff.
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What was the problem?
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For some reason, "show mature" was turned off, fixed it though lol.
Are you okay?
(Sorry that I haven't been on, a lot has been going on anyway, I look forward to the next installment.)