• Published 1st Aug 2013
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(SiC) Part 1 - Ain't Want No Yeller Ponies 'Round Here - Brian Jacko



Applejack becomes racist and it's up to her friends to change her views.

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A New Group is Born

When the girls came to Twilight's library, Spike had set up a tea party and welcomed them back.

Everypony sat down and enjoyed some Sunday tea. They also talked about plans for Applejack's Baptism.

Twilight Sparkle used her magic to levitate a quill and scroll. "How about a letter to the Princess, Applejack?"

Applejack cleared her throat and said, "Dear Princess Celestia, today I learned that harboin' hatred and bitterness in yer heart is unhealthy and destructive. I learned an important Bible verse today and it was very important for me to memorize it. The verse says, Let all bitterness, and wrath, and anger, and clamor, and evil speaking, be put away from you, with all malice. Ya see, I had a bad past experience with a certain pony and I assumed all ponies of his kind were bad, but thanks to Fluttershy and the message of Christ, I am a new mare again! We are all created equal in His eyes and we are all precious to Him. I have never felt such joy and contentment before in my life. Friendship and love is magic, and I'm so blessed to find new sisters in Christ. Yers Truly, Applejack."

Twilight Sparkle jotted everything down and gave the letter to Spike.

Spike used his magical dragon fire breath to send the letter away to the Princess.

Applejack put her front hoof across the table and asked, "Sisters in Christ?"

Each pony put their front hoof on top of hers and said, "Sisters in Christ!"

"Hey!" Applejack exclaimed as she pulled her front hoof back. "Why don't we make a group and call it, Sisters in Christ? Would everypony like that?"

The rest of Applejack's friends agreed and thought that was an awesome idea.

Applejack looked at Twilight Sparkle and said, "Twilight Sparkle, ya seem to be the smartest one here. Would ya like to lead our little group?"

Twilight Sparkle giggled and had a bit of blush on her face from the compliment that Applejack had given her. "I'd love to!" she admitted.



Applejack ended up giving up alcohol even though she loved that spiked apple cider. Whenever she used to drink it, she would become bitter and racist, but now she was done drinking alcohol for good.

Granny Smith decided to shut down the bar and use the bar as a storage place for farming equipment. She realized that ponies were getting drunk and it was leading to disputes and arguments and sometimes ponies would even get a little physical with each other.

Applejack learned to live in peace and contentment as she would show love and compassion for all others because the love of Christ had touched her heart through a little yellow pony named Fluttershy.

The end.

Author's Note:

This story is part 1 of the series that I'm doing.

Part 2 can be read here...

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/124561/flutter-clutter

Comments ( 2 )

*raises a brow* Applejack hates ponies with the same colored coat...?

*coughs* RACIST

What does SiC stand for?

Also, I agree that there should be information on religious elements. Although my reasoning is more so that I know you're actually serious and not an anti-Christian troll. I automatically assume that every story that explicitly involves Christianity is going to be mocking it, which is a correct assumption more often than not. The test I use is to read the comments section. If Christians are upset, it's a mockery. If atheists are upset, it's genuine. If neither are upset, then I have no idea but it's probably well-written (or has an insufficient sample pool). If both are upset, then it's probably bad writing. The "Christian" groups really need to start screening the stories that get added, because I'm quite sure that most of them are mockeries added by trolls. (Why is there an M-rated clopfic in the "Family Friendly" folder?)

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