Vinyl Scratch has lived her entire life in Ponyville watching the heros and heroins go into the everfree to hunt down the monsters that reside inside it. To learn which of the three paths of legacy she is and to go out and fulfill her destiny!
Dude, don't listen to these people, your story is going well, and honestly if you need/want help feel free to ask. I really like this story so far, and would be happy to share my ideas on this....but it's cool if you want to solo it, I'll read every one, and be honest. Anyways good luck.
2969333 Awesome! I didn't really find any errors....yet, and for a late night story it was well made, except for the end...you can tell you're tired by the lack of detail, and depth of the characters....also is there some place where we could talk about this not in the comment area?
2969370 i agree with raiinification while i don't know what the others said for doing this a like 1 am it's pretty damn good so continue on with it as it's a concept iv'e never seen before an i d o like a new perspective on things
Dude, don't listen to these people, your story is going well, and honestly if you need/want help feel free to ask. I really like this story so far, and would be happy to share my ideas on this....but it's cool if you want to solo it, I'll read every one, and be honest. Anyways good luck.
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Thank you, I have to admit I was up till around... Let's say 1:43 am writing this so I was afraid that I was too tired to make it good.
Edit: Also, yes... yes I would very much love help... solo is EVIL!!!
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Awesome! I didn't really find any errors....yet, and for a late night story it was well made, except for the end...you can tell you're tired by the lack of detail, and depth of the characters....also is there some place where we could talk about this not in the comment area?
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Yea, hold on.
2969370 i agree with raiinification while i don't know what the others said for doing this a like 1 am it's pretty damn good so continue on with it as it's a concept iv'e never seen before an i d o like a new perspective on things![:raritystarry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritystarry.png)
So.... Blatantly RWBY, yeah? No complaints here, it promises to be a good storyline.