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Inspector Gadget


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Poor Shining Armor.

What a sad fate to fall upon you. The Elements of Harmony were stolen, your beloved wife was killed, and your daughter was hidden somewhere in the city. And if that was not enough suffering, the people believe that you were responsible for her death, though she was the same alicorn you swore to protect. But we know what really happened don't we? Yet here you are, rotting in a cell, waiting for a crowd’s cheer as your head hits the block, while the city is slowly being conquered by rats. Let’s see if we can't do something about that, and to make things interesting, I'll give you a gift.

Use it well, Shining Armor.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 12 )

Have you ever seen the English language written before? No, seriously, I'm curious.

English motherfucker, do you speak it?

Great spin on things, I like how you adapted the story for the MLP universe. Spelling and such could use some work, but hey, I'm not one to judge. I thought it's cool (probably because I'm a really big Dishonored nerd)

So... First Major problem... English.

I need a profreader (Properbly spelled wrong).

Thanks for the support guys :twilightsmile:

2946333 yes you do, but so far this seems quite interesting. I will keep reading in the meantime, have a moustache spike :moustache:

i think this is a good idea, but maybe you should rewrite it. just touch up the grammar mistakes

I was just thinking how someone should do this and then I find it. :fluttercry:
Reading this story this weekend. Life is good.

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