While examining the Alicorn Amulet, Twilight Sparkle soon finds herself talking to a soul trapped within the amulet who calls himself Bright Light, The Master of Fire. Twilight then agrees to go on a quest to free Bright from his 1,000 year imprisonment. Being free is just one of Bright's thoughts, will he have to reintroduce his most dangerous invention to the world in Equestria's time of need, and how will he ever fix the mistakes he made in the past?
Authors note: This is my first story so any constructive criticism would be appreciated.
Chapters (6)
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Yet another brilliant chapter. I'm really liking these flashbacks they show a different side to canterlot which is very interesting and bright light is just a good character who kind of reminds me of myself and having relatable characters almost always makes a good story.
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Awww. Thanks!
This is great! And good. And many other words.... That mean great.
Don't worry about how long it takes, as you said school comes first.
Cheers!
Another great chapter. I love your writing style. Take your time I'm a strong believer in school first.
3057753 Dude, you really need to get this going again. Quite a few people wish to see what comes up.