Super Trampoline the Bat Pony's Day As Presented Through Various Writing Paradigms

by Super Trampoline

Chapter 7: Pinkie and the Fruit Salad: (Ostensibly not) A Word Search

"... I'm pretty tired from exercising. But I could use your help with meal preparation."

"Ooh ooh ooh! Sounds fun!"

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Super Trampoline was a very very hungry Pony. After all, he just spent the last (length of time) exercising. Fortunately, his excellent friend PINKIE PIE was MORE than happy to help him whip up a bawsy sawse meal.

"So Super, whatcha hankering for?" the sacharine mare asked

"Well," he replied, "us bat ponies really love our fruits, being, you know, part fruit bat. I also have a thing for broccoli."

"Coolios! What are some of your favorite fruits and vegetables?"

"Weeeellllllllllllllllllllllll... I like:
APPLE APRICOT BANANA BILBERRY BLACKBERRY BLACKCURRANT BLUEBERRY BOYSENBERRY BROCCOLI CANTALOUPE CHERIMOYA CHERRY CLEMENTINE COCONUT CRAISIN CRANBERRY CURRANT DAMSON DATE DRAGOFRUIT DURIAN ELDERBERRY FEIJOA FIG FRUIT GOOSEBERRY GRAPE GRAPEFRUIT GREENBEANS GUAVA HONEYDEW HUCKLEBERRY JACKFRUIT JAMBUL JUJUBE KIWI KUMQUAT LEMON LIME LOQUAT LYCHEE MANDARINE MANGO MANGOSTINE MELON NECTAR NECTARINE ORANGE PASSIONFRUIT PEACH PEAR PEAS PINEAPPLE POMEGRANATE POMELO PRUNE RAISIN RAMBUTAN RASPBERRY REDCURRANT ROCK SATSUMA STRAWBERRY TANGERINE UGLI and WATERMELON."

"WOW!!! That's a LOT of fruit!... And a few vegetables. is there anything you don't like?"

"Well, as far as fruits go, I HATE mango and strongly dislike tomatoes. And there are way too many vegetables to list."

"Wow, well lets SEARCH for some of those fruits in the..."

Author's Note:

Author's Notes! Hey readers! Can you help Pinkie find all these fruits hidden in the word search so she can make a bodacious fruit salad for Supes? Totally radical dude! (It may will be easier to read this in an equal-width font like courier new or something.)

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Comments

[Bongo Bongo]

Die

[Super Trampoline]

4120900 why would you like me to die? Or are you trying to speak German or something?

[Regidar]

4120900 The

[Radio Flier]

I'm a bit confused. Is there a rhyme or reason to this story?

[Bongo Bongo]

4120993 Glock

[Roudee]

I have never read anything like this here before, and I liked it. Although, I can imagine that I would grow tired if this became a thing. Very original; will sleep now. Oh, it's 2:49 AM... That's very...

[Patient X]

4120913 Diese Geschichte ist Kacke. Ich hoffe, dass Sie dies zu realisieren. Ihr Charakter ist lächerlich suchen, Ihre Steckdose des Geschichtenerzählens wird verzögert, und ich kann mein Gehirn das Gefühl, zu sterben, wenn ich lesen.

[Super Trampoline]

4121708 I'm glad you liked it. I'm honestly not sure why it bombed so bad. I guess trolls don't like stories about bat pony OCs with experimental narrative structure.

[Super Trampoline]

4122530 while I thank you for being the only person who actually left criticism (albeit in German), unfortunately it was extremely useless. If you like, I would happily link you to some sources on how I provide constructive criticism. Have a great day!

[Roudee]

4122535
I do not believe that it was reviewed badly because of the writing; The writing was excellent. The reception was most likely caused by the fact that what was presented was not traditional in any way (save one chapter.) personally, I appreciate new ideas that break the boundaries of "ordinary." Perhaps in the future you could try again, but I would give the reader a fair warning so that they may be more open-minded.

[Commissar Holt]

Concerning this fic...

[Super Trampoline]

4122608 Thank you for your kind words.

[Winree]

4145055

[Seize the day 23]

*suddenly sees an update in batponies*
Hmmm, what am I missing here.

[Super Trampoline]

4864297 A quirky little story unfortunately downvote-bombed by trolls because of the General Zoi's Pony Creator cover and the Mary Sue-ish description.

[Seize the day 23]

4864331 That's the problem with anything; people are naturally asses.

[The Guardian and Friends]

Obvious Trollfic is Obvious.

Don't.

[Elric of Melnipony]

A self-insert with a terrible title and even worse cover art? I'm not reading this.