When it comes to Flight School, Rainbow Dash is pretty careless. It's not that she isn't a good flier, but sometimes her recklessness can get in the way of what she is truly capable of, however, Rainbow Dash isn't the only one with fly
It was only the first day. Maybe it was always like this at Flight School. Maybe the first day was always hell for certain newbies that stood out.
Oh back in High School, this was so true. If you were a loud-mouth cool kid, the seniors would take notice of you and that's bad. Lucky I'm a quiet hermit. Always have been.
Maybe school wouldn't suck so bad after all.
You do not learn, do you, Dash? *Reading on...* Okay, maybe I'll take that back.
Rainbow couldn't help but think that she was also very attractive.
Yup, crazy is of course, attractive. Don't deny it.
Well that was an interesting way for the two to meet.
I thought it was well done, a few mistakes mostly where it felt like the wrong tense was used, but other than that... the chapter flowed well and was a gripping read.
Oh back in High School, this was so true. If you were a loud-mouth cool kid, the seniors would take notice of you and that's bad. Lucky I'm a quiet hermit. Always have been.
You do not learn, do you, Dash?
*Reading on...*
Okay, maybe I'll take that back.
Yup, crazy is of course, attractive. Don't deny it.
Well that was an interesting way for the two to meet.
I thought it was well done, a few mistakes mostly where it felt like the wrong tense was used, but other than that... the chapter flowed well and was a gripping read.
2948058 Ah! Sorry for those mistakes...they are easy for me to make, but I am happy that you were able to enjoy this chapter even so
I was so excited when I found out you posted a new chapter! Can't wait to read more :D
2954952 Yay! Glad you seem to be enjoying it!