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FlutterDash777


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This seems like it is going to be good!
I like the way it is written, for some reason it makes me edgy.

Brutal. I take it its now time for Fluttershys entrance soon? I'm looking forward to seeing how the Flutterdash will go in this. It looks promising. Not quite so looking forward to the tradegy part of this, but it is seeming very promising so far.
:rainbowkiss::yay:

Well this made me remember my room in my respective hall of residence, back in the day. Well, at least every room had a window and were made to house three people. They were still small, and with all three residence having a PC, you can't imagine the mess of wires that were running around :rainbowlaugh:

Room 13.....Room 13.....

How ominous! :pinkiecrazy:

Maybe Flight School wasn't going to be so bad after all.

Way to jinx it Dash, way to jinx it!

2909860 Glad you are able to enjoy it :pinkiehappy:

2909988 Just....nice? :raritydespair:

2910173 Fluttershy will be coming soon :yay: And as for the FlutterDash....it will be a very different approach on it that I will be taking :raritywink: The tragedy....will probably be brutal as well :rainbowlaugh:

2910467 I always hated small dorms....I thought 13 would be a great number for her room :pinkiecrazy::heart:

This looks like it is going to be a rather promising story. I look forward to reading it.

2911678 Don't get me wrong; I love darkfics, but there are some things that just don't pickle my nickle.

I'm gonna guess this is going to get brutally. MOAHAHAHAHAH :rainbowlaugh: oh boy :rainbowderp:
I wonder how flutterdash will pull off on this story

2911678
You know, you gave me an idea that set my mind in motion. (Which is never a good thing as far as I recall. :pinkiecrazy:) It's weird how I ended up crossing MLP with Friday 13th.
I am so sorry, Fluttershy! Please, put down the knife..!
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My coloring cries out for improvement.

2915849 You drew that? It's pretty awesome! :pinkiecrazy::heart:

2918623
First one that made it to what I would call a "complete" state, using Photoshop. Every other one is still in a sketch/half-sketch state. Once I learn how to control the lines better, I expect some improvements. :pinkiecrazy:

It was only the first day. Maybe it was always like this at Flight School. Maybe the first day was always hell for certain newbies that stood out.

Oh back in High School, this was so true. If you were a loud-mouth cool kid, the seniors would take notice of you and that's bad. Lucky I'm a quiet hermit. Always have been. :rainbowlaugh:

Maybe school wouldn't suck so bad after all.

You do not learn, do you, Dash? :facehoof:
*Reading on...*
Okay, maybe I'll take that back. :twilightoops:

Rainbow couldn't help but think that she was also very attractive.

Yup, crazy is of course, attractive. Don't deny it. :pinkiecrazy:

Well that was an interesting way for the two to meet.

I thought it was well done, a few mistakes mostly where it felt like the wrong tense was used, but other than that... the chapter flowed well and was a gripping read.

2948058 Ah! Sorry for those mistakes...they are easy for me to make, but I am happy that you were able to enjoy this chapter even so :raritystarry::heart:

I was so excited when I found out you posted a new chapter! Can't wait to read more :D

2954952 Yay! :yay: Glad you seem to be enjoying it! :rainbowkiss:

Ahh, first you had my curiosity now you have my attention, this development will keep here in the long run so props to yea...

You never seem to post a story or chap that disappoints me. :pinkiehappy: I'm hyped for the next one.

3229168 I used to pop out chapters every week, but school has caught up to me. So I will have to apologize for that :raritydespair: I'm trying my best to write as I can though, so just keep an eye out for new stuff from me :pinkiehappy::heart:

3229275 I know dat school feel...

At first I was like... good chapter:pinkiehappy:
Then I read that Fluttershy was kissing somepony else and was like... Your not getting a comment from me this chapter! I though we were in for some Flutterdash! :twilightangry2:

But then when Fluttershy started mumbling in the dark and told Dash she loved her I was like WTF is going on here? :rainbowhuh: how could Fluttershy first be kissing some random pony then immediately go for Dash? I'm not complaining that Fluttershy and RD are now sleeping together, as I love seeing them together. But this chapter has really made me wonder what is going on with Fluttershy and what will happen next. Is fluttershy kissing ponies and getting with them only to kill them or something...? that scene in the dark with Fluttershy watching Dash in bed paints a strange picture and makes me wonder at her mental stability.
You have my attention, well and truly. Sorry for missing the release of the chapter but I don't normally go reading pony stories nowdays.

When I can to the end of the chapter, I think its an increadable piece of work and you have left me wondering about so many things that I really cant wait to see more released.

:rainbowwild::heart::yay: Flutterdash FTW!

3251224 It's a confusing one, but soon it will be pieced together! :raritywink:

or.....was.....she not even real at all...

Mhm, I'a Cthulhu fhtagn.

she just wished she could slap right off of their smug faces.

Rainbow PUNCH!

"I said...I think I love you."
[...]
"Let me love you."

I don't think rejecting is an option, Rainbow. :pinkiecrazy:

And erm... yeah, again: I'a Cthulhu fhtagn.

:rainbowhuh: ... :pinkiecrazy: i want to read more please

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