Discord. Discord everywhere.
The world must be balanced. Chaos and order in an everlasting dance, creating havoc if one misses a step. When a being that has been asleep for fifteen hundred years wakes up, will the world be torn apart from the seams? Or is there another factor? One that no one could have imagined?
This story will try to be true to the show rating-wise. No 'adult' content.
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interesting.... continue
you have my attention. keep up.
Dun dun dunnnnn! Any way I like how you actually have both order AND chaos, so you actually have balance or over balance.
This looks promising
To be honest I was just going to skim through this story(I know I'm sorry!) because its not something I usually read but for some reason I didn't and continued reading and wow! I really can't wait to read more of this. insta fav!
Ps: I really liked the way you wrote the small little reunion for Fluttershy and Discord
2910383 Wow, thank you so much! Your comment made me positively beam!
2913461 Whoops, there was supposed to be a page break in between those to scenes. Added it in. Thanks a bunch!
of coerce pinky wakes her up who else would
3142545 Rofl, just you wait. Hopefully the next chapter will be very humorous indeed.
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This story, it has words, I like words. There are also characters, they do stuff. Stuff is fun to do! That is also important for stories. This has all the requirements to be a story. Yay!
3142970 Well, I certainly can't wait to hear your thoughts after you've read it! :D
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This story, it has words. Stories need to have words. There are also characters, they do stuff. That is also important for stories. This has all the requirements to be a story.
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This story, it has words. Stories need to have words. There are also characters, they do stuff. That is also important for stories. This has all the requirements to be a story.
3153011 Yeah... I'm sorry about the rushing of it. I'm thinking of going back and rewriting the beginning. Also, she's not all-powerful, she's just like Discord. And she is going to have a lot of flaws, and I think there is a lot of room for character development. So, I apologize that you did not like it, but...
Also, my second OC? Constance is the only one. What other OC?
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This story, it has words. Stories need to have words. There are also characters, they do stuff. That is also important for stories. This has all the requirements to be a story.
3176564 Oh, lol, sorry. My expertise on Fanfiction slang is limited. Thank you for enlightening me.
I have a question. Do you think it would be best if I went back and rewrote what I've written so far, to include character development and less rushing? Do you think that would make the story better in your eyes?