0.o cant wait to see what happens to twilight...

What will she do now that she's Sombra's slave?

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sick twisted fucking things hopefully sombra only has a 1inch or twilight if fucked

This might be one of the few clopfics I like.

I can imagine Sombra being a pervert.

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Kinky things.

This is foreshadowing something interesting... This is getting exciting!
4.3 / 5 stars

I'm liking where this is going, but I have two nitpicks:

1. The contract Twilight signs does not promise Sombra will leave the crystal ponies alone in exchange for Twilight's servitude. The absence of that clause makes the contract entirely pointless. That needs to be part of it as per the bargain.

2. It seems kind of OOC for Sombra (though he doesn't have much character to begin with, I'll admit) to just give directions to his place and trust that Twilight will show up as agreed. Wouldn't it be more fitting that he just swallow her up in his shadow magic and drag her to his lair?

This... this is... dumb. Silly. Stupid. It makes no sense. Hell, it doesn't even make porn sense!

Dude, Draconian, you're better than this.

Wow...
What the hell Shining Armour? "It's going to be okay, Twiley".
I would never let my sister do something like this. Well, there has to be a story, so I'll ignore that.

Wooooooah! This fic got real good, real fast! O.O Plus I knew it would be good just by looking at the sexy cover pic and the fact that it was in the featured stories Btw there is a thing that has been bothering me though. (I hope you read this Mr. Draconian Soul, the author) All the settings and tones of this fanfic scream Dark as a genre, coz Twilight will eventually be corrupted and all... I don't see any sad in it, though there might be some in the future... anyways, I think you should add the genre "Dark" to the story!

This contract binds the signer into eternal servitude to King Sombra

Okay hold on. This clearly already violates the Unfair Contract Terms Act. Be smart and report it to your local trading standards department!

Oh, dis gonna be good.

this is awesome! although one thing i noticed is that in more place than one, you forget that theyre ponies: He snapped his FINGERS, for examlpe. i dont want to sound like im demanding anything, actuallly the show can make the same mistakes in the diologue. but great material!
but, if you intentionally wanted it huminized, you probablhy should have mentioned that in the description.
but its still a great story!

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Er... one of the tags is Anthro and the cover art is anthro

come on, make with the fucking

You know, there's already a my little slave.

I was wondeering if I could put this on Wattpad? I would give you complete credit

Twilight didn't read it carefully enough.

This contract binds the signer into eternal servitude to King Sombra. All conditions and rules must be obeyed at all times. If at anytime the signer disobeys commands, Sombra has the right to punish him/her anyway he sees fit. The jobs the slave will be required to do include but are not limited to:

1. Cleaning

2. Cooking

3. Bathing Sombra

4. Tending to Sombra’s personal needs

5. Guard

If Sombra feels the signer is in anyway trying to usurp or kill him, he has the permission and right to end the signer’s life on the spot.

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I see nothing on Sombra leaving the Crystal Empire alone.