A new adventure rises when the Covenant and the Changelings want Twilight's crown. Will the Spartans and the Mane 6 be enough to save Equestria and Earth?
UPDATE 2021: This is no doubt the worst story I posted on this site-- not just for my writing, but my abhorrent attitude towards those who were just trying to give their criticism. Am I proud of this? Absolutely not, but I feel the need to post this for new writers to see, just to learn what NOT to do when people don't quite like your work. Also... do your research on your source material. I learned that one the hard way.
Chapters (5)
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Wow, that cover art....
Dude, can you even grammar? Can you even coherent sentences? Sorry, I can't upvote this. Go back to primary school, you might learn something in English class.
Edit: MS Paint Master Race. Did you know that Gimp is free?
I could get you a better cover art probably... And probably help edit as well.
I guess that the description is short, to the point, and subtle enough to lean into an idea of the story, but that's probably the only good factor this cesspool of a story has.
If the cover art is bad I used paint. Also I'm 11 so I don't know how to use it well.
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If you can't do it at that point, then don't. And don't use your age as an excuse.
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2957475 How deep and meaningful.
2957499 how about what you said?
Is it bad that just by seeing the cover art I matched each one of them to a character in red vs blue
crimson is that guy in that fire team,right
to PandOracle: You watch rvb too?! Yay!!!!!!1
3495897 as far as I know, crimson is the main character in halo 4's spartan ops.
I'm sorry but I just had to laugh at the "Gore" scene in the second chapter.
Spartans with chainsaws and Sangheili wielding human flamethrowers? WTF?
I know the Arbiter used a flamethrower at the end of the ninth mission in Halo 3 to burn the Flood, but never on Chief. Also warning young readers about a game that's actually meant for ages 17 and up is just too hilarious. I'm more scared of zombies in Minecraft or GLaDos from Portal then Halo gore and violence. I was being sarcastic by the way
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I don't mean to sound like a jerk, but this story was just awful. I've read better MLP/Halo crossovers fics then this and I'm currently working on my own. I'm making sure each of my chapters is two-thousand or more words at least. Mostly everyone knows a story is already bad if each chapter is below one-thousand words; also if it's a crappy and uncharacteristic OC.
I know your young and entitled to your fun and I respect that, but at least try to make stories people actually might like for once. I recommend that you should start off by writing one-shot stories, but in order for them to pass moderation, they need to be a thousand words or more; and obviously having the characters of MLP featured or mentioned as well. I also recommend you work on your paragraphing, and starting a new line whenever a character speaks. The walls of texts made my eyes go all"
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Like I said before, I don't mean to be rude, but it's showing how bad this story really was. People can tolerate minor mistakes, not major ones.
Nice troll fic. This is a troll if, right? Because only a troll fic can be THIS bad.
3879750 It probably is man
Spartans using chainsaws and Sangheili using human flamethrowers is just unrealistic in the Halo-verse. Also a taming gun for Fluttershy is just dumb.
What was this kid thinking?
3881573 I don't blame you. I agree hat I could have done better.
3940541 I would consider reading everything about the universe on the Halo Wiki; maybe even play more of the game. Perhaps even purchasing a few Halo novels might help to
I see what you mean, I only play Halo 3: ODST, Halo 3, Halo 4, and Halo Wars. Maybe I should watch more Halo Legends or read the books. I don't know that much on Halo, I should get more info and play more.
3954473 There's also Halo: Reach, and the anniversary of the first game, Halo: Combat Evolved to add to your list. Halo 2 is possible to play on the 360 if it has the label approving it, but who knows how easy it is to find a copy. I'm pretty sure there's going to be a remake for Halo 2 I think.
If you find a way to obtain the missing games I mentioned, you'll pretty much have the entire story so far.
4014133 Ok, thanks! By the way, new fic on the way! Trust me, it'll be better than this ever was!
awesome!!!!!!
100 out of 10!!!
Just got Halo Reach! I see how awful this story is, and I see what was wrong. I try different ideas to see what works. This was written when I only had ODST and Halo 4.
Wow. You've got a lot of downvotes on this one; what is it about your story that people dislike so strongly?
4542216 Well, the Halo series is a complicated storyline which I didn't realize at the time, I didn't know about the books or Red vs Blue. ( Which I watch now by the way...") Now I know that the "Covenant Leader" is really the Profit. I now know that paint SUCKS at making cover art and that paint.net is much better.
This was a bad story, I admit it. But there's the good stories, the bad stories, and the meh stories.
4795641 If you decide to make another crossover (and even if you don't), I'll be sure to check it out; I'm aware that Halo 4 and ODST don't give a lot of story background.