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Balance. That is what will protect Equestria from the looming threat of the Nothingness that consumed the High Elements generations ago. Celestia and Luna have found all but one, yet still things aren’t as easy as they’d like. Discord seems to have an idea about where to find the final element, and has been set loose in the hopes that he truly is reformed. Princess Luna heads north, planning, with Cadance and Shining Armor at her side, to conquer Loneliness. And Twilight Sparkle, still green in her royal duties, has been left behind by her friends as they attempt to make their dreams come true. But when a summons demands that the Elements of Harmony unite once more, she’ll have to retrieve the other five in the hopes that their friendships are still as strong as before.

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Love the story so far.I've been waiting for a story between the 4 princesses.

Hm, this was a pretty good first chapter - you offered up just enough of the plot-to-come to grab my interested, and leave just enough unanswered to be tantalizing. And from what has been introduced, you seem to be aiming at something Big in terms of events that are to come - which certainly doesn't hurt the anticipation.

Your writing itself is quite solid and pleasant to read, and your characterization seems to be pretty spot-on, though I'm not sure about the bit about Twilight having taken to wearing her tiara ALL the time - I can't quite picture her doing that (she doesn't like to, after all - she doesn't even wear it in the palace as we saw in the movie), especially while simply lounging about her library.

That aside, I'm looking towards where the story about these additional Elements goes, how the alternate world is going to tie in to this and what role it ends up playing, along with the full implications of Spike's growth, and why Twi's friends apparently aren't sticking around that much now. Looking towards the second chapter.

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