An average college student dies. No big news there. However, this unfortunate fellow happens to die at just the right time for a millennia old god to sense him. Discord, who not having anything better to do while encased in stone, takes the time to grab the recently departed soul and set him loose in Equestria. With a few 'improvements' of course. The question is; For what reason?
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intresting at least this time when the dude dies it wasn't cause he was some angsty teenager who was also an orphan much potential abounds from this fic and i see dash is in the charater tags which alone fills me with hope
Interesting, I shall wait for more.
Whelp good so far.
I'll favorite for now and like it once the story progresses a bit.
So far so good, i hope his magic is some crazy logic defying stuff that nopony except himself (and discord) can make sense of.
Good so far but you can't have two different people talking in the same paragraph. I makes it sort of confusing.
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Thanks for the constructive input! Feel free to give me more.
Did good on the paragraphing though their wasn't much dialogue (which is fine!), the plot is moving along nicely, and I love it when main characters get injuries. The only problem with it for me is the line of curses during the timber wolf attack. Oh and do you have a proof-reader?
2 questions: What was the pun and what does impromptu mean?
Do want.
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Welp, the pun was that "I wasn't out of the woods yet." Since Alec was still in the Everfree. Not exactly a clever pun, but it was a pun. Impromutu means that is was a spur of the moment thing and not planned in any way.
And no. I don't have a proof reader.
Still want.
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What exacty do you mean my friend?
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Do want.
Still want.
Want == More
More == Story
Story == New
New == Chapter
If 'you' == 'any questions'
do "PM Robertsolution"
ahhhhhh you didnt atleast pull out your pocket knife and sever his aorta on his neck before dieing?
so whats the deal with practically every single fic having the protagonist lose consciousness? i would like them to rather fall asleep or something aftwerword while being patched up or so and so just not unconsciousness.
do want more of this, it's looking good and the story is interesting!
I like
WANT MORE
very good story so far.
@Raventalon Y U NO MAKE NEW CHAPTER?
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Because I'm too much of a procrastinator. I'll make it...eventually.
3208897 Wow you really are good at procrastinating.
FUCKING CLIFF-HANGERS!!!!!!
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Well, I try. So...yeah, I'm working on the third chapter after what can only be described as an extended hiatus. It'll be up soon enough. I'm terribly sorry about how great my procrastination skills are.
I really hope one day this story will be updated.