5591703 Ha! I actually made those tags myself. Looks pretty official, right? Yeah, those aren't legit, but I use them because they add more info at a glance for my fics.
The wait was worth it!!! This one was so sweet I was actually getting teary eyed when they were saying goodbye. I loved how you started it out when she was a filly to end when she was leaving to ponyville. I'm a sucker when it comes to sentimentality, and this chapter really gave me the feels all throughout. I honestly thought it would've ended just with filly twilight, but you went full circle with their relationship in this story so to speak, ending with mare twilight. This was great
The feels are strong in this one This is so far the best and the worst chapter. The best due to the feels and the way you portrayed Anon as a member of the guard, which you did quite well The worst due to the un-fapability... Unfortunately this way more of a story about growing up than one about pony sex
5594355 Understandable, but after writing so many of these chapters it starts to become less about the screwing and more about the story. I mean, It's rather boring for me personally to write what feels like the same clop but with a different filly, so since the start of this fanfic, I've been slowly focusing on the story as opposed to the clop. It may not be what people are looking for, but at least they're getting something. I'll keep in mind about the clop stuff in future chapters, but it's rather difficult to write something interesting and original when the end result is cumming in a filly.
Well, you might as well head out and stand guard. You walk out of her room and bump into something. You look down and notice your princess is standing there. “I wanted to see how Twilight was doing.” She states. “From the sounds of it, she is doing better than I would’ve expected.” This is odd. Your princess is not speaking in a tone that would either suggest you were in trouble or that she is pleased. “I did my job.” You answer. “Dedicated as always.” Celestia turns away and walks off down the hall. You aren’t sure what to think. You can only assume that you aren’t in any trouble, but that still doesn’t help take away this deep feeling of wrongness. What you did isn’t legal here in Equestria either. Still, your princess is turning a cheek to this? It’s better to ignore this, you still have a filly you need to watch over.
This. This right here, sent me on a roller coaster of emotions from "OH SHIT!" to to to "WTF?!"
I was gonna favorite this, but then i realized that I already did long ago, which is why i was alerted to this chapter. This chapter was a whole story by itself. If it were it's own story I would have Favorited it, I wish I could double favorite.
Now that I've had a few minutes to compose myself again; this was an amazing chapter. The feelings conveyed here are very strong, very emotional and very compelling. Being able to see the characters grow together throughout the years, one being a protectorate of the other and helping her when needed, was wonderful to experience. Now, that's not to say there weren't faults, mostly grammatical, not that I'm complaining.
Now otherwise, in a tl;dr fashion, you did an outstanding job, my friend. Can't wait to see more.
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Why would I want to fuck a guy who looks like a question mark? Well, now I want that.
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Oooof course.
This was too sweet all my feels just got kicked in the gut.
my reaction
EDIT: Derp. I'm slow. those aren't real tags. BUT THEY SHOULD BE!
Commenting only due to the new FOALCON and PONYxHUMAN tags. ROFL! xD
Buck that shit. I'll be reading this just for those two tags being deemed 'necessary' on Fimfic lmao!
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Ha! I actually made those tags myself. Looks pretty official, right? Yeah, those aren't legit, but I use them because they add more info at a glance for my fics.
5591716 Those tags are awesome. And adds to the lols. At least no one can complain they 'accidentally' read a foalcon story. :P
I'll bite the bullet and ask if the entire Mane 6 will be screwed before this fic is over?
Also, Rarity!
princess lunaand by the way good job
Resume Derpy please
5591716 They are totally useful too; and look legit sept a little larger but still awesome!
YOUR ALIVE! *throws confetti everywhere*
This one was sweet. I think luna would be a good pick.
I think this was one of your better ones. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work.
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Also great chapter!
The wait was worth it!!! This one was so sweet I was actually getting teary eyed when they were saying goodbye. I loved how you started it out when she was a filly to end when she was leaving to ponyville. I'm a sucker when it comes to sentimentality, and this chapter really gave me the feels all throughout. I honestly thought it would've ended just with filly twilight, but you went full circle with their relationship in this story so to speak, ending with mare twilight. This was great
Luna
Fluttershy
The feels are strong in this one
This is so far the best and the worst chapter.
The best due to the feels and the way you portrayed Anon as a member of the guard, which you did quite well
The worst due to the un-fapability...
Unfortunately this way more of a story about growing up than one about pony sex
Trixie?
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But seriously, don't go into my shed.
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All I know is that my gut says maybe.
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Understandable, but after writing so many of these chapters it starts to become less about the screwing and more about the story. I mean, It's rather boring for me personally to write what feels like the same clop but with a different filly, so since the start of this fanfic, I've been slowly focusing on the story as opposed to the clop. It may not be what people are looking for, but at least they're getting something. I'll keep in mind about the clop stuff in future chapters, but it's rather difficult to write something interesting and original when the end result is cumming in a filly.
This. This right here, sent me on a roller coaster of emotions from "OH SHIT!" to to to "WTF?!"
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We need more Woona!
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that is 5 lunes so far Luna for the win
I was gonna favorite this, but then i realized that I already did long ago, which is why i was alerted to this chapter. This chapter was a whole story by itself. If it were it's own story I would have Favorited it, I wish I could double favorite.
Why can't I favorite this more?!
Hopping on the Luna bandwagon!
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I really loved the clop in this fic, but if you can keep up the story elements I will most likely enjoy it more
Maybe a chance to hook up with young Big Mac on the farm
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Don't you mean... THE WOONA BANDWAGON!
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This. I'd like to see some m/m foalcon and you're probably one of very few authors who could pull it off well.
maybe you could do a filly version of fluttershy?
Now that I've had a few minutes to compose myself again; this was an amazing chapter. The feelings conveyed here are very strong, very emotional and very compelling. Being able to see the characters grow together throughout the years, one being a protectorate of the other and helping her when needed, was wonderful to experience. Now, that's not to say there weren't faults, mostly grammatical, not that I'm complaining.
Now otherwise, in a tl;dr fashion, you did an outstanding job, my friend. Can't wait to see more.
*gasp* omg there's a chapter without a filly getting raped for the hell of it? O:
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5607874 lol, could you do a CSGO filly? That seems pretty funny. Or... Hmm, I got it!!! Zecora filly!
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Is it wrong that when I see CSGO. All that comes to mind is "Counter strike: Global offensive"?
Woona FTW
How and Where did you get the extra tags?
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I make custom tags when I'm bored and add them to my stories if they apply. Few minutes in photoshop and an upload to imgur is all it takes.
This one was pretty sweet.
I wish I could thumb up/favorite chapters.
Huh. Came to cum, stayed to feel.
I dare say that you've got the basis for a wonderful little slice of life story with this material if you ever decide to do something else with it.
Just watched an episode with River. Let's Kill Hitler, I think.
THERE ARE NOT ENOUGH THUMBS OF UP FOR THIS!!!!
Nyx, From that one story.
Twist, mite be intersting....
Celestia and Luna Fillys? (That could make for an interesting prelude before the main event.)
Thats all I can think of....
Great chapter! Even gave, Spike, some scene time. Cool!
I also suggest, Luna! It can even be a continuation of this chapter!