After an event launches Applejack from her home in Equestria and into our world in a bizarre body, it's up to a strangely familiar face to take care of her. Together, they slowly learn that some women, like wine, get better with age.
Oh, my god. This was hilarious to read! I like how realistic you made her reaction: No automatic "Oh, look at me, I used to be a pony, but now I'm a human, so that must mean I have complete mastery over how to control my brand-new form!" bullshit. Just straight, "DAFUQ IZZAT? DAFUQ IZZIS? *looks directly down* DAFUQRDOZE?!?!?!?" That whole scene made me laugh harder than a drunk at a Comedy Central special. Nice work, man, keep it up!
2888905 By any chance you had a hand in the making of the Hellsing Abridged episodes? That "DAFUQ IZZAT? DAFUQ IZZIS? DAFUQRDOZE?!?!?!?" is just far too familiar
2889154 No, I can't rightly say I did. I just used what I thought would be funniest. Hell, I haven't even SEEN Hellsing abridged (sorry, little lynch mob, wait until later, yeah?).
This is getting really good now. Though already I'm thinking of what's going to happen if Cherry, I mean Sherri and AJ fall in love with each other and the rest of AJ's friends come to take her home. Will AJ leave for home or stay behind? And if she chooses to go home, maybe she can go find Cherry Jubilee in her home world and pursue her.
14,711 possibilities? Well, at least it's a finite number. One that's orders of magnitude less than I expected, though that may just be the number of universes in which ponies can survive...
In any case, looking forward to more on both ends.
2888872 I'd ask for details. A fabrication would contradict itself eventually, and until then I'd be getting free entertainment.
so you made aj black for this and gave her super long blond hair -.o? are you quite sane good sir?..... think i'll stick with the much more easy to visualize white with blond hair , like jj's pics one of which you used for the cover image.....
I'm with Marty. Some crazy woman shows up and says their a horse, I'd call the loony bin.
Oh, my god. This was hilarious to read!
I like how realistic you made her reaction: No automatic "Oh, look at me, I used to be a pony, but now I'm a human, so that must mean I have complete mastery over how to control my brand-new form!" bullshit.
Just straight, "DAFUQ IZZAT? DAFUQ IZZIS? *looks directly down* DAFUQRDOZE?!?!?!?" That whole scene made me laugh harder than a drunk at a Comedy Central special.
Nice work, man, keep it up!
Also, I forgot to point out in my previous comment (if it's still there, don't know if FIMFiction derped or not) this little nugget:
You can do one of two things with this sentence regarding "saw". You can either:
A) Keep it and change "had" to "last", or
B) Change "saw" to "seen".
Just to throw that your way, make it known.
I would imagine AJ's going to have a ball working with those new appendages
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Yeah, I'm horrible
2888905
By any chance you had a hand in the making of the Hellsing Abridged episodes? That "DAFUQ IZZAT? DAFUQ IZZIS? DAFUQRDOZE?!?!?!?" is just far too familiar
2889154
No, I can't rightly say I did. I just used what I thought would be funniest. Hell, I haven't even SEEN Hellsing abridged (sorry, little lynch mob, wait until later, yeah?).
This is getting really good now. Though already I'm thinking of what's going to happen if Cherry, I mean Sherri and AJ fall in love with each other and the rest of AJ's friends come to take her home. Will AJ leave for home or stay behind? And if she chooses to go home, maybe she can go find Cherry Jubilee in her home world and pursue her.
This. More of it.
14,711 possibilities? Well, at least it's a finite number. One that's orders of magnitude less than I expected, though that may just be the number of universes in which ponies can survive...
In any case, looking forward to more on both ends.
2888872
I'd ask for details. A fabrication would contradict itself eventually, and until then I'd be getting free entertainment.
More i need more please don't make me beg
loving it so far, cant wait for next chapter
2888927 you can edit comments to add something after posting it....
so you made aj black for this and gave her super long blond hair -.o?
are you quite sane good sir?.....
think i'll stick with the much more easy to visualize white with blond hair , like jj's pics one of which you used for the cover image.....
Hear about it no, dream about it on the other hand...