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Merc the Jerk


Merc's fic guide: by Bookplayer: Is there kicking and/or punching? [Yes/No] Have you considered adding kicking and/or punching? [Yes/No] Have you considered adding more kicking and/or punching?

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Very well done! Pat yourself on the back! I don't favorite many stories, but this one is worth it!
I eagerly await your work!

Nice work, Merc, mah man. I honestly can't wait to see where you take this. Also, I couldn't help but eyeroll at the "mature" tag. Kinda threw in the best of both choices from the vote, there, didn't ya? :rainbowlaugh:
Oh well, I'm not complaining. Obviously you got my stuffing reference. :raritywink::rainbowlaugh:

And now I must do this:
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Discord you insane reality bender. :trollestia:

So far I like it and I will keep watching it until it's done. You deserve a present...here have this baby sloth:
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Oh god, that cover art. Using sexiness, I see. You make me so proud. :rainbowkiss:

Her hat! Where's her hat! :raritydespair:

Hans again, hm? I'm curious now, he's the one character always consistently showing up in every one of your fics. Man, all those side roles but never any fame or fortune for Hans. Doesn't seem like he would mind though.

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Thank you kindly, hope I live up to your expectations.
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I figured this story would have more than one sex scene, so I thought I'd play it safe and mark it mature. And yeah, kinda went with the best of both worlds here.
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Thanks!
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Gotta learn from one of the best, coach. :rainbowkiss:
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She rose and opened the door, noting Hans and the worn stetson he clutched in front of him.

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Guy needs a pay raise. Only so much globe-trotting you should expect from a character.

Lured in by the cover art, staying for the story. :ajsmug:

This fic taught me that it snows in Louisiana.

The title and description are in homage to the David Lee Murphy song of the same name, arent they?

This looks like a really good story. I admit, I am a fan of Cherry Jubilee X Applejack (Or CherryJack as I like to call it) and this has a lot of potential to it. I shall await more of this story. :twilightsmile:

I have to read this just cause of the titole reminds me of a song thats now stuck in my head you gloryus bastered

Oh my.

Came for the cover picture, decided to stay for the story.

mind giving me the URL of the cover art? puh-lease? the source only leads me to John Joseco's gallery, not the actual picture

EDIT: found it on John Joseco's tumblr
http://lovetomorrowlove.tumblr.com/post/32729395657/its-been-awhile-since-i-uploaded-mlp

Hmm.. I've never read Cherry x Applejack before. The human angle is unexpected. So you're going to juggle romance and Applejack trying to get back to Equestria.

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I loved the picture, and started writing the story because the poor girl finally got a tag of her own.
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Yep. Not as bad as a Missouri or Arkansas winter, but they still occasionally get spat on.
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Nailed it, sir.
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Cherryjack is one of those ships that never took off quite so wild in the fandom. I don't know why, as I think it's great, but that's just how it goes, I guess. And to answer you, Seether, yeah. It's gonna be kinda like that.

2838165 Well hopefully this fic will help make that pairing more popular.

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I missed that somehow. :derpytongue2:

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CherryJack sounds nice, but what about AppleJubilee? Sounds like a party. :rainbowlaugh:

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I kinda like AppleJubilee better. It just sounds so fun, you know? I'm pretty sure they know, if you catch my drift... :raritywink::raritywink::raritywink:

Well, this should be interesting. Especially if there's a significant time differential between the two universes and, relative to Equestria, Applejack spends only a second or two out of universe. Oh, the look on her face... :trollestia:

In any case, looking forward to more.

Space Ghost approves of your pic. 10/10 will fap again.

love the pairing, written well, looking forward to seeing where this goes

Nice introduction. If I was reading right, then there was a bit of inter-dimensional transport there. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Alright, added to Twilight's Library.

I'm with Marty. Some crazy woman shows up and says their a horse, I'd call the loony bin.

Oh, my god. This was hilarious to read! :rainbowlaugh:
I like how realistic you made her reaction: No automatic "Oh, look at me, I used to be a pony, but now I'm a human, so that must mean I have complete mastery over how to control my brand-new form!" bullshit. :ajbemused:
Just straight, "DAFUQ IZZAT? DAFUQ IZZIS? *looks directly down* DAFUQRDOZE?!?!?!?" That whole scene made me laugh harder than a drunk at a Comedy Central special. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
Nice work, man, keep it up! :twilightsmile:

Also, I forgot to point out in my previous comment (if it's still there, don't know if FIMFiction derped or not) this little nugget:

Discord sighed, crossing his claws over his long body as he sat nearby where the mares had saw their friend last.

You can do one of two things with this sentence regarding "saw". You can either:
A) Keep it and change "had" to "last", or
B) Change "saw" to "seen".

Just to throw that your way, make it known. :twilightsmile:

I would imagine AJ's going to have a ball working with those new appendages :ajsmug:

lifting up her breasts and letting them drop

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Yeah, I'm horrible :rainbowlaugh:

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By any chance you had a hand in the making of the Hellsing Abridged episodes? That "DAFUQ IZZAT? DAFUQ IZZIS? DAFUQRDOZE?!?!?!?" is just far too familiar :ajsmug:

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No, I can't rightly say I did. I just used what I thought would be funniest. Hell, I haven't even SEEN Hellsing abridged (sorry, little lynch mob, wait until later, yeah?).

This is getting really good now. Though already I'm thinking of what's going to happen if Cherry, I mean Sherri and AJ fall in love with each other and the rest of AJ's friends come to take her home. Will AJ leave for home or stay behind? And if she chooses to go home, maybe she can go find Cherry Jubilee in her home world and pursue her.

14,711 possibilities? Well, at least it's a finite number. One that's orders of magnitude less than I expected, though that may just be the number of universes in which ponies can survive...

In any case, looking forward to more on both ends.

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I'd ask for details. A fabrication would contradict itself eventually, and until then I'd be getting free entertainment.

More i need more :pinkiecrazy: please don't make me beg :fluttercry:

loving it so far, cant wait for next chapter

Eeyup, AJ's havin' a ball with her new form.Slow and steady wins the game, AJ.
I swear I knew someone who'd pick thorny weeds with their bare hands... granted, it must've been about two decades ago. :ajsmug:

even more stories with jj cover art??.....

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even more stories with jj cover art??.....

Go earth pony powers, go!

“I don't care what she says. I'mma make this work.” She squatted low, patting the plant like it was a friendly dog. “An' yer gonna help me, ain't that right, Danny?” With a pause, she reached and plucked a few more berries. “Yer pretty good at makin' these, by the way.”

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Wasn't expecting this at all! Nice work carrying over the Earth Pony prowess and ties to the land. It seems no matter where she goes, she's one with the earth. I love it! :ajsmug:

Magic is more than walking on clouds and moving things with your mind. It's even more than listening to the earth and what grows in it. I get the sense that this story will remind us of this quite often.

Also, it'd be nice if there was the occasional cutaway to Discord's misadventures through the multiverse, though I suppose they'd ruin the mood.

I like this. Also, love that AJ is still AJ in her core. :twilightsmile:

u write this so incredibly well, this is a truer applejack than the show's applejack. i think this story might become the shining example of the cherry x applejack ship, like composure for twilestia or that one i cant remember the name of for spike x rarity

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i cant remember the name of for spike x rarity

This one? :ajsmug:

2888927 you can edit comments to add something after posting it....

so you made aj black for this and gave her super long blond hair -.o?
are you quite sane good sir?.....
think i'll stick with the much more easy to visualize white with blond hair , like jj's pics one of which you used for the cover image.....

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