A word to the readers; for those that read the latest chapter yes, that subject is very sensitive and no, I don't think i handled it well at all. Soem time ago someone requested a antagonist that uses well, SEX as a weapon and I felt incredibly uncomfortable writing it.
That said however, any author worth his/her salt should be willing to write about anything (even rape...or toaster sex...or f/f/fm/f/goat, whatever).
Also if the antagonist comes off as just a dimwitted brute, then yes - that was the point. Not every story can have an antagonist that is both cunning and charming.
Either way i hope everypony enjoys at least soem part of this.
6493669 It was an awesome story and even if it did contain sex you (unlike other writers) concentrated more on the love and adventure part of it. You did an Awesome job and I wish you would make a sequel (or one more chapter) on how everyone recovered after this ordeal.
I think this side story was amazing If you ever feel in the mood to leave this with an epilogue you really should. Maybe put some Twiclight smutt in~ Or what Luna was day dreaming perhaps? Regardless, you have done it once again
This chapter was a ride. Brutalis dead, good, but he suffered too little.
And Chryssie lives. Words cannot describe how happy this makes me. I knew she'd live due to the last chapter of Jungle Fever, but it was still one he'll of a ride.
A word to the readers; for those that read the latest chapter yes, that subject is very sensitive and no, I don't think i handled it well at all. Soem time ago someone requested a antagonist that uses well, SEX as a weapon and I felt incredibly uncomfortable writing it.
That said however, any author worth his/her salt should be willing to write about anything (even rape...or toaster sex...or f/f/fm/f/goat, whatever).
Also if the antagonist comes off as just a dimwitted brute, then yes - that was the point. Not every story can have an antagonist that is both cunning and charming.
Either way i hope everypony enjoys at least soem part of this.
I will find you. And i will make you write another
6493740 what he said, except more Twi and Chrysie. maybe a continuation of how things go from here.
Obligatory musical reference GO!
6494147 So, I guess I wasn't the only one singing that while reading the end.
6493669 It was an awesome story and even if it did contain sex you (unlike other writers) concentrated more on the love and adventure part of it. You did an Awesome job and I wish you would make a sequel (or one more chapter) on how everyone recovered after this ordeal.
-Techy
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Working on the epilogue chapter right now.
I think this side story was amazing
If you ever feel in the mood to leave this with an epilogue you really should. Maybe put some Twiclight smutt in~
Or what Luna was day dreaming perhaps?
Regardless, you have done it once again
A TFS DBZA quote?
6495981 how is the epilogue coming along?
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10200 words or so, been stuck there for a week though. Youtube videos take a lot more time that you would expect.
6632636 lol its fine, just dont forget about it
This chapter was a ride. Brutalis dead, good, but he suffered too little.
And Chryssie lives. Words cannot describe how happy this makes me. I knew she'd live due to the last chapter of Jungle Fever, but it was still one he'll of a ride.
The epilogue can't come soon enough.
Cya
Raziel-chan
I think jungle fever was the first fic I ever favorited on this site. Now, after rereading it for fun I find a sequel?
ALL OF MY YES
6632636 any progress on the epilogue?
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13,800 words so far. Will probably finish up soon then editing.
6894981 yay! My only regret is that it's ending. ..which also begs to ask, do you plan on making a sequel?
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I had plans to, but using Zecoras duaghter instead. BUT first I have to finish up 3 other fics, which may take awhile.