So the new chapter is done(it was actually done a month ago , but I was really too busy to edit it) and I feel, well, disappointed in myself. I know I typically do requests for people, but rape is a very touchy subject for a lot of people and I was very uncomfortable writing in an antagonist that uses his anatomy as a weapon.
This chapter alone will probably garner more downvotes than any other fic I have done, but just know that as a writer I must be able to write anything, even things I feel uncomfortable writing. To the person that requested I do a 'rape-ish' chapter in one of my fics, here, don't expect me to go down this route again anytime soon.
I loved this chapter. Drama action and now the power of death itself is knocking at the door and the only thing holding it back is the writer....why must we wait this long to finally have the sweet blood drip from twilights hooves?!?
4510829 Since that is the literal definition of a tragedy, you would be correct. Or rather, it won't end well for the main character. Which is why I never read tragedies.
It's always disappointing to see that tag on a story that looks like it could be interesting.
In formation that is in the prequel; she has to prepare her body for such a thing, as it takes massive power reserves. Also she just hatched so one can assume it has limitations.
So, Nightmare Moon is Luna'so manifested Hatred... What would a Nightmare Twilight be called... Eternal Darkness? Arch mage Doom? oh how about Midnight Sonata!
I ahve been working on other stories, sorry that I have spread myself thin. Also I opened a new youtube channel and that takes up considerable time as well.
6441787 Next chapter is 33% complete if you don't count editing and no, I haven't even decide if she will use a weapon. Also, small spoiler, with great power comes...lack of control.
So, next chapter is 99.78% done, just a few more paragraphs and it goes right to editing. Sorry for the long wait, but juggling multiple stories(and writers block) is really hard.
Rape is horrible, yes, but you present it as such here. This instantly elevates you above many other writers here. I remember one fic with Shining capturing Chrysalis and him and Cadance brutally raping get in the dungeon as revenge, with Shining deciding to keep her in secret from his wife and use her as a whore for all his soldiers. It made me sick.
But you present it as something horrible and I'm sure Brutalis will get what's coming.
So the new chapter is done(it was actually done a month ago , but I was really too busy to edit it) and I feel, well, disappointed in myself. I know I typically do requests for people, but rape is a very touchy subject for a lot of people and I was very uncomfortable writing in an antagonist that uses his anatomy as a weapon.
This chapter alone will probably garner more downvotes than any other fic I have done, but just know that as a writer I must be able to write anything, even things I feel uncomfortable writing. To the person that requested I do a 'rape-ish' chapter in one of my fics, here, don't expect me to go down this route again anytime soon.
As for the rest of you, well, downvote away.
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Don't worry about the rape part.
People that actually respect your writing shouldn't downvote this because of 1 single touchy subject which isn't even the majority of this chapter.
Also so I don't forget. I did enjoy this chapter.
The beginning was freakin funny.
And even though I personaly think rapers should all just get executed I don't mind it in stories. As long as you know it is all made up.
P.S Make sure Twilight makes Brutalis suffer
I loved this chapter. Drama action and now the power of death itself is knocking at the door and the only thing holding it back is the writer....why must we wait this long to finally have the sweet blood drip from twilights hooves?!?
And the reason she couldn't do the 'cocoon reincarnate' thing is...?
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Since that is the literal definition of a tragedy, you would be correct. Or rather, it won't end well for the main character. Which is why I never read tragedies.
It's always disappointing to see that tag on a story that looks like it could be interesting.
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In formation that is in the prequel; she has to prepare her body for such a thing, as it takes massive power reserves. Also she just hatched so one can assume it has limitations.
Yea umm I think Twilight's rage just broke. Everypony Hide!
5261167 Really though, you just brought her back to life and then you killed her.
Well a shitstorm is approaching and none of you have an umbrella... sucks to be you.
Badass Twilight? Count me in!
I really dislike reading about rape, but the fact that Twilight is about to go bazonkers on his ass makes it all good :D
So, Nightmare Moon is Luna'so manifested Hatred... What would a Nightmare Twilight be called...
Eternal Darkness?
Arch mage Doom?
oh how about Midnight Sonata!
Do you have any idea when you could have the next chapter ready? (I hate this cliffhanger )
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Really busy with the youtube channel as of late, so I only work on chapters on the weekends sadly.
5299193 how about Midnight Dusk.
I can't stop reading this ending
um the bad guy broke twilight ..... i think everyone should run
5316628 so is this story dead...or what?
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I ahve been working on other stories, sorry that I have spread myself thin. Also I opened a new youtube channel and that takes up considerable time as well.
6146604 so how have your other stories been coming?
6317620 very very slowlyit's actually kinda hard to juggle a youtube channel, work and fini\aces all at once and still find time to write anymore.
Great chapter, love the drama and tension you put into it.
Now I can't help but wonder something. Luna has a war scythe and celestial has a mail. Wonder if twilight will get/make a weapon and what would be?
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Next chapter is 33% complete if you don't count editing and no, I haven't even decide if she will use a weapon. Also, small spoiler, with great power comes...lack of control.
So, next chapter is 99.78% done, just a few more paragraphs and it goes right to editing. Sorry for the long wait, but juggling multiple stories(and writers block) is really hard.
Rape is horrible, yes, but you present it as such here. This instantly elevates you above many other writers here. I remember one fic with Shining capturing Chrysalis and him and Cadance brutally raping get in the dungeon as revenge, with Shining deciding to keep her in secret from his wife and use her as a whore for all his soldiers. It made me sick.
But you present it as something horrible and I'm sure Brutalis will get what's coming.
Cya
Raziel-chan