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After a fire in the Everfree Forest, the ponies of Ponyville are forced to shelter the displaced monsters in their homes until the forest growns back. Will Ponyville survive, or will the culture shock drive everypony crazy?

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Please, for the love of English, learn to use italics.

This started off really strong, and then the vignettes quickly became very much a matter of hit-or-miss. The story would have greatly benefited from more planning.

I gotta agree with Norse. It started off really well. The ending though... had me really confused and disappointed. :rainbowhuh::ajbemused:

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