I only write occasionally but enjoy reading more,especially if the story involves prince blueblood.
Its been a month after the grand galloping galloping gala and prince blueblood is still in canterlot. Other then still feeling embarrassed about the whole thing,blueblood hasn't changed much. He has no idea how his aunt plans for that to change. With the help of the main six and his guard friend Green Gust,blueblood will be going in for many new challenges.
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This is a good start and I would like to see more.
There are a few grammar issues.
1) you need to space bar after a ., etc. heres a tip space bar twice after a .
2) also capitalize a presons name. You've done this a few times and one more tip when proof reading read the chapter out load and slowly.
Very nice. Can't wait to see where this is going.
I like this and shall track this fic, I LMAO, Blueblood isn't an asshole he's just a social-retard and only a bit of a tool. Also if this is gonna be Apple Jack x Blueblood shipping kudos to you, because I don't think I've ever seen that done before.
I'd need to read more to get a better feel for this fic, but if it remains funny, light and feel good then I'm all on board for this story.
Peace Out.
233383Thanks for the advice
233764 Your welcome
Nice. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Well, considering that Blueblood is a tool, working on a farm should be very natural for him.
I wonder what's wrong with Angle. Great chapter by the way.
480338Thank you
233764 I can see you.
629118Whats that?
629154 It's me Paulinaghost! Scarlet!
629182Hi then
I finally found you its me ShiningShadow1965 from fanfiction. I already review your chapters at fanfiction and added you for future chapter and me and my wife enjoyed it bravo.
1504785Thanks
I like how this story is going so far. However, one thing you are going to have to work on, is capitalizing names.
2732994Your my first comment in a long time and I plan to continue when I get around to rereading my stuff for the grammar mistakes or things that may need change. Procrastinating is something I'm still working on but comments of any kind help me. Thanks for commenting and giving me some advice as a bonus.
Interesting premise, but the lack of capitalization on names and other sundry grammar issues lessens it somewhat.
Keep it up! With some minor clean up, this will be a very good story indeed.
I like this concept. At some point, I'd like to clean it up for you.
Has this story been abandoned?
I hope not.
3418231Sorry,along with being a an easily distracted procrastinator I think at some point I lost a bit of drive for this story. I wanna try and at least get another chapter up before the year is out.
Who do you think he should meet next?
3418840
: Eeyup. It's too early for the CMC.
3419018 So big mac next?
3419239 Eeyup. Blueblood does have to go back to work.
I am so sorry to see that you lost interest in this story. *sigh* That sucks, but what can I do. Anyway, good luck with whatever you plan on writing next.