Well hello there Awesome Journal!,
It’s the almighty Dashie here!,
Before you ask, this isn’t some soppy diary. This is a journal.
"Dashies Journal"
Today I start my new school, where I’m going to be trained to be the best flyer ever in Equestria. It’s obvious that one day I’m going to be really famous, and so somepony has to be tracking down all the awesome adventures I had. And that’s where this comes in. Anything that happens in my life is going into this journal.
One day, when I’m signing autographs for my fans, they are going to be asking questions like “Were you just a normal Filly at somepoint?” To which I am going to nod and give them a copy of this epic Journal.
Future fan over there, and me signing autographs!
The question is what shall I call this truly amazing journal. I’m thinking somewhere along the lines of “Dashie the Awesome: Teenage Years” Awhhh yeah. And then? Somewhere Underneath? There is going to be a little caption that says “Every Flyer started on the ground” It will sell like Carrot Cupcakes. And everyone loves Carrot cupcakes.
Actually, I have been here on this train ride for far too long. And in the meanwhile, I have actually done a copy of the cover for my future best selling book.
Pretty awesome right? The only thing I need now is an agent once my high school days are over. Oh! Almost forgot, I made this pretty cool thing to stick inside my Journal Below.
“Name: Rainbow Dash. (But call me Dashie!)
Age: 14
Crush/Special Somepony?: N/A
Likes: Having adventures and being totally epic.
Dislikes: Disloyal Ponies
A picture will go here"
I have actually been on this ride for what seems like forever. It’s so boring not being around some ponies who I know. Hey, I wonder who my room mate is going to be? I bet she shall be totally amazing and probably just dying to meet me, she just won’t know it until she sees me.
On this train ride here, I have had two large hot chocolates and a carrot cake. But hey, I stay in shape by flying everywhere and the service here is really good. And not to mention totally delicious!
"Awesome Carrot Cupcake, Super big hot chocolate"
My father has always wanted me to be a flyer you know? Ever since I was a little filly he always trained me to fly to my best ability. I guess I only hope I can make him as proud as I possibly can really.
Oh woot! That’s the train stopping, I better pack my things and go.
I’ll write more later, Gotta keep my future fans up to date with my life!
Salutations, good sire. I have read this first chapter, and noticed your pleas for an editor. I'd be willing to offer my services, as well as a like and favorite. You have my best for this story, and I shall do my best to help.
Thank you for your time,
Signed, -Prisoner 24601
Short, but it is Rainbow Dash.
Final opinion once chapter two read.
Diary of a Wimpy Kid much? :P In fact:
Very much like Diary of a Wimpy Kid, good start though.
You know that's Diary of a Wimpy Kid, right? It's illegal to take someone else's work and copy it almost verbatim if you're going to make money off of it, I hope.
have you read diary of a wimpy kid
its just coz some of the quotes are similar to the book
no offence