The air smells like smoke and this tea tastes like burnt plastic.
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chrumsum
the wankstain formerly known as Chromosome
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Oh my god what the fuck is this
I'm still gonna read it, sure
but I'm just
what
Ohhhh looks creepy~
I'm guessing either
A.) Chrome is trying to mix unusual tags and see what happens (in this case dark and random)
or
B.) It's time for another group therapy session.
Really creepy.
WHAT IS THIS
WHAT IS MY LIFE
AAAAAAA
...
Wow... I have no idea what this is but it's pretty good at being whatever it is.
Dang, only 15 more words to get featured. And it was wicked awesome too!
Protip: mushrooms reduce the sanity of any writing by over 300%
What is the dream? What is reality? What is Pinkie planning with that trebuchet?
A pleasantly disturbing look inside the mind of the Element of Laughter. Thank you for it.
I get it
Holy shit... What was THAT?
And I liked it!
~Skeeter The Lurker
I don't even get who Dash and Twilight are. ALSO WHY IS THERE NO MERCHANT D:
EDIT I"M A DINGUS
Purification in progress...
>the the treats
Okay. I get it now.
Very nice. Very insightful. Shows all the neuroses of Pinkie without making them seem too unreal -- "Fluttershy thinks I'm too critical of her, Twilight's going to leave me any second, Rarity secretly hates my guts," etc. etc. I like this very much.
That was good Rarity.
Chromosome, you always write the most fantastic things. This creeped me to death, but once I found out your whole curve on it, it put everything in perspective. Seriously, how do you come up with this stuff?
You have your own ominous style of writing, and I love it. Keep up the good work, sir.
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I don't know what this is... But I like it.
Someone should make an animation of it.
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Are you serious? Does a story need at least 4K to get featured?
Damn... Guess I'll have to rework my story... again... for the sixth time...
In other news: Seems you've got yourself quite the story here Chromosome.
...Jesus what fuck the?...
I...I don't eve-...I feel disturbed on a deep level right now...
A disturbing and surreal look into the fractured mind of Pinkie Pie, and all I can think is "What does the fucking cover art say".
I love this so much. So much.
well... that was certainly interesting.
i guess you must live hell before creating heaven.
What is the title for this story derived from? I googled it and it was mostly music.
Of all the things this connects to is the game, OFF. The sugar kills you, the white building, and the plastic water. Just to ask, were you thinking of this game while writing this?
EDIT: And why is it title Midnight Breakneck?
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The title is based on a song on the OST of a game called "Off", around which this story was inspired.
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Loosely translated, the title of said song is called "Midnight as loud as possible".
3067910 I must have typed something wrong.
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not a bad dream, possibly reality, and when everything is good its a dream.
or its another world they go into when they sleep, regardless of everything else, like homestuck.
staaaay in your cooooma
you should take a stab of happiness
i swear pinkie has the face of a murderer...
its proly not safe around her.... you best just stay in your coma, at the front gate, outside flesh fountain..... with a soft breeze, just like clockwork, listen to the avatar beat, do the flesh maze tango.....
are my puns bad enough yet?
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google translate says "Turn off me that", its proly something like "Turn me off" or "Turn that off"
from french
Hence, nothing remains
except
for our
regrets.
I fucking loved that game.
Fucking brilliant.
No seriously, that was fucking brilliant.
This is my kind of story.
I think is common knowledge in the fandom that there is something wrong with Pinkie Pie's mind. But this is a beatiful and, may I say, f
cking weird way to explain her behavior and motivations. I like how everything is explained at the very end and not a moment sooner.
Downloaded. Thanks and Grats.
That .. was a little messed up.
Loved OFF, and I loved this.
I don't even know what else to say.
I'll be thumbing up, and favoriting.
Yeah...This story definitely earned a favorite from me. Wow it's creepy.
wow. that's interesting. I didn't know Rarity had such a mouth on her.
it'd be interesting if everypony hated Pinkie's guts. good story.
A mind without purpose will wander in dark places. And what a journey it took...
Thank you for this work of fiction, even though you may have left the site forever.
Holy shit. What the fuck? That was a wild ride.
This is probably the second creepiest fanfic I've found, just below Bon Bon Bon Bon Bon Bon. And I have a read a lot of things tagged dark.
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Oh-so true.
You'll never see this, I'm afraid, but this was awesome. I'm actually playing OFF right now!
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i see everything
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Yeah!! I imagine the backgrounds would be in sort of a loose, charcoal-type Burton-esque style (or like the illustrations in Aragon's Primal Fear), and the ponies would be the only solid figures with colour, but all the rest have a palette that's just a little bit off (like a pastel watercolour). Pinkie is the only one with her original and full design/palette.
I love this so much