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She was given a past that haunted her. Her future was always uncertain, and the pain she carried with her would always haunt her.

But there was another path that could have been...a path that was in another world. This is how she set her hooves on that path.

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A gift story written for Twow443. For those who follow his riffs, you know Yaazi - who first appeared in my story "Pound My Pumpkin" - appeared in the riffingverse at Fluttershy's doorstep with no explanation. This is the explanation. This is how she got there.

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Edit: Since I have more ideas for "Stories of the Riffingverse", specifically, of Yaazi growing up there, I have changed this story to incomplete. Each successive story of Yaazi growing up will be added here, although perspective will change between chapters.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 18 )

I'm sure twow would LOVE to see this. Did he tell you, though, that we're working out an origin of our own that ties into my Chryscord riff and his Retribution of Chrysalis riff?

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Really? No, he hadn't mentioned it. I did note him that this was written, and that I thought he could riff it with Yaazi and Fluttershy.
This was actually the story I came up with myself to explain how Yaazi wound up on Fluttershy's doorstep, and it would have eventually tied into my own introduction to the riffingverse - when Killer Steel has time to teach me riffing using "Son of the Princess" - as Yaazi would know the me within the riffingverse - the dragon who picked her up and left her at Fluttershy's, with the note from the author me.

Yeah, I enjoy playing with ADMPD situations (Alternate Dimension Mirror Personality Disorder, it's when you have a tendency to encounter a lot of dimensional alternates of yourself.)

Not bad, not bad at all. It could have been a bit longer, but hey. I enjoyed it.

Also, I saw a few typos. I'll be sure to address them in the riff.

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Alright! I wrote in what I could while maintaining perspective.

Okay. Now that was just too damn cute.

Excuse me while I go to restart my heart.

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You go do that. Yaazi needs her Daddy functional.

First they ransack the lab, then they steal the TARDIS.

Yup. Children.

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Yeah, kids. Here's hoping nothing goes horribly wrong while they're time travelling.

...was Rainbow Dash always half reptile? And was Lyra always bipedal? I can't quite recall...

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Something I realized only recently.
I meant for Dinky to be dressed up as Doctor Who, to be like her Daddy, Doctor Whooves/Time Turner. But, relative to which Doctor he is supposed to be, she's dressed up as the NEXT Doctor. :raritystarry::applejackconfused::derpyderp1::derpyderp2:

*Sees the title* First thing that came to mind:

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That's where I got it from. In a very odd way, the plot of this story is an echo of the song, as applied to the life of the main character, Yaazi.

HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG..... ded.

This chapter is not...relevant any more...

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Umm...explanations? Should it be deleted? I'm not sure I understand.

"It would have been sufficient"...

Miss Bridle is my new favorite fanmade pony. :pinkiehappy:Wish I had a teacher like that growing up! Tough teachers are easy to find, tough and fair, that's a goldmine!

Yes, I second that emotion.
HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

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The Doctor she is dressed as doesn't really matter, Time (Turner) is relative after all . . . Sorry, couldn't resist. :derpytongue2:

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