I've never written once in my life. It's difficult. Would love some criticism of my work. I know it sucks. But I'm trying to make it! ^^
Rainbow Dash the Cyan Pegasus that is 20% cooler than most ponies goes and tries her hoof at a new trick and gets trapped in Ghastly Gorge. How will she get out? Will she get out? Or will she die? Read to find out! Based on the story by Aron Ralston "127 Hours" and also I got the idea from the episode "May the Best Pet Win!"
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Rainbow Dashie, Rainbow Dashie,
Squish her like a little pattie!
Rocks will eat her limb by limb,
but Tom will come and bring his police hattie!
lol, my fail attempt at making a song! I'm so smart!
(Sarcasm; see what I did there?)
Awesome story, bro!
Just a few spell errors but everything else is awesome! !!
Wait. I’m confused. Did Rainbow cut off her wing or not? I can’t understand the writing.