Well, you got me hooked at HumanXNightmare Moon. I also like Nightmare's personality here. She isn't a heartless bitch who kills everything she sees. She's not pure evil. She got a little bit of innocence in her.
So I finally checked in on this fic and holy shit. Already at 40 favorites and 24 likes. Thank you all for your support, I will definitely continue this. Not exactly sure when I'll get the next chapter up but rest assure that I am working on it. :)
Might want to get an editor or pre-reader. Its not illegible, but some parts of it are either rushed or lacking. Other than that, good story. Liked and faved to follow.
All you need to do is post in the story description that you're looking for one. If anyone is interested, they'll ask, if not, just keep writing as usual.
First of all I love this just thought you should know second is Derek wearing a Slipknot shirt cause cause I'm thinking its either that or a reffrence to Majoras mask
so far so good friend look forward 2 more
nice made me chuckle please continue
Not bad. Not bad at all.
Well, you got me hooked at HumanXNightmare Moon. I also like Nightmare's personality here. She isn't a heartless bitch who kills everything she sees. She's not pure evil. She got a little bit of innocence in her.
PS: The human is an asshole though...
So I finally checked in on this fic and holy shit. Already at 40 favorites and 24 likes. Thank you all for your support, I will definitely continue this. Not exactly sure when I'll get the next chapter up but rest assure that I am working on it. :)
Huh, asshole humanxnightmare moon. This looks fun already.
Might want to get an editor or pre-reader. Its not illegible, but some parts of it are either rushed or lacking. Other than that, good story. Liked and faved to follow.
2897146 I wan't to get an editor but one: I don't really want to bother anyone with it and two: I don't know anyone to that could edit for me.
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All you need to do is post in the story description that you're looking for one. If anyone is interested, they'll ask, if not, just keep writing as usual.
2897718 alright thanks
First of all I love this just thought you should know second is Derek wearing a Slipknot shirt cause cause I'm thinking its either that or a reffrence to Majoras mask
2899446 slipknot for the win my friend
Yes,this goes well.More plz
oh yes main charicter is a jerk and a atitude that makes you want to punch him I love it already cant wait for more.
I like it and look forward to more.
Oh my god AWSOME
bow shicka wow wow just kidding never read a fic with nighmare moon or celestia having a relationship its new and i like it
Nice story all and all but, to me, the guy should be flipping his shit. What with the talking horse and the fact that he's in a hole new world.
4260900 probably he is gothic
I lieks this