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Twilight Sparkle is fascinated with ancient ponies from the time of Luna and Celestia’s adolescents. So much that after a little idea from her assistant Spike, she tries to bring back ponies of the old world to her time now. She succeeds in her attempts to bring said ponies, but instead of bringing an ancient pony, she brings seven!

Even more so, what is she going to think when she finds out that these old ponies were originally there to be the parental figures of Celestia and Luna? This will be fun...

Collaboration between Pen Brush and Slayerbrony

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 29 )

I have a strange feeling this is going to end up on the front page rather soon...

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That's sweet, but I don't think that will happen, but thanks for encouragment

Well that was rather enjoyable, I really liked that story. Any idea when the next chapter could be out? :pinkiehappy: Good job with the zodiacs, I think their personalities fit very well.

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thank you on the compliment, we work on stories every day, and we have a lot of fun doing it. You may notice that my name seems rather weird, but that is because this is a collab fim account, where me and slayer are going to post all of our collabs on now. We have 4 other collabs 2 on mine and 2 on slayers if you want to enjoy some others while you wait for this one.
Pen Brush

2665441 That's the whole basis of writing isn't it? Having fun? I did notice your name but I didn't mind it because it's not my place to question who puts what as their username, whether it's a collab or not. I'll be sure to give those a read sometime because I'm pretty sure I'll enjoy those as well. :pinkiehappy:

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I learned half a year ago that if you write just to make others happy, and you arent having fun, your doing it wrong, so i started writing for myself,and I dont care what others think. and it is a lot of fun to write with others, slayer is an awesome friends with a lot of cool collab ideas
Pen Brush

2665503 That is a pretty good point you have there, if you don't enjoy writing but it satisfies others, you might as well not write at all. There's no point. Writing with others does sound fun, might try it next time with a friend who writes regularly. Cheers man :twilightsmile:

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your welcome, and I'm actually a girl, but its fine, people get it wrong a lot...on minecraft mostly, thinking girls cant play games...sorry im going bitter about some guys

2665577 Awwww dammit I did it again! That's the tenth time this year! Sorry :fluttershysad:

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It's alright, you didnt know, i wont hold it against you! :pinkiehappy:

2665595 Cheers, I've made a lot of mistakes like that recently. Sorry again :derpytongue2:

oh no Aquarius? :pinkiegasp: spose it would be easier to manage not having to write ALL the zodiac ponies i guess.

great story anyways, shall fav/like :pinkiehappy: and eagerly awaiting an update :D

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Yep, would be vary hard to do all of them, its hard enough with 6...7 of them...gemini is going to be vary confusing
Pen Brush

2665972 heh yeah. :rainbowlaugh: you ever see g-force? cuz the gemini twins kinda remind me of the mice XD
"you guys are idiots, right?" "right!"

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are you kidding? I love that movie so much! And the description of the Gemini said that they act like that, so we thought of them as 2 more pinkie pie's, only without the crazy pinkamena...we think :unsuresweetie:
Pen Brush

2668079 haha :rainbowlaugh: can you imagine that? like one of em is the 'bad' twin and the other the 'good' or..dun dun dun...both?! :rainbowlaugh: yeah they both go all gollum from lotr :pinkiecrazy:

The story is charming, although these time travelling ponies seem to be handling their fate with considerable aplomb (except Pisces) :raritywink:

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yes well pisces sometimes cant handle the truth of the world, so she would be the only one to go in her fantasy, and the other ponies did freak out at one point
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Um...I have heard of gullum but never played lolr

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new chapter will come soon

Iiiiiii.... Like it! I was going to do the same thing, just with rainbow colored ponies... (And have them bow down to Rainbow Dash as supreme ruler!!! BWAHAHAHAHA) and make them different elements... I shall use my knowledge!!! Course there would have to be 8 ponies and that may become unwieldy... So I shall leave it to a partner who wishes to write a story about them. I have all the info on them, just shoot me a PM.

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I might just do that
Pen Brush

2737158 HA! Didja like my ranting? Just saying in advance, I have ADHD so it's not my fault.

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I dont understand the rant

2737250 well, you see- its just a rant! Get over it! I am completely pointless when I speak to people! I am like some freaky :pinkiecrazy: hybrid! (Ha I did it again!) absolutely in sane.

“Speaking of cooking, is there a kitchen I could use? I’d like to cook myself. It’s a relaxing thing to do.” Libra said slightly smiling. I read that wrong:pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick:

“I have the ability to use fire, fire is an extension of lava, fire is my element.” Arias said, “I was fine.”
“Fire’s my element too, but you don’t see me jumping into volcanos.” Leo said blinking.
“You’re scared.” Arias said simply.
“And your crazy.” Leo retorted.
“Pinkie is crazy.” Arias shot back.
“Which is why she is so attracted to you.” Leo said smirking.
“Fine, believe what you want.” Arias said.
“I think I shall.” Leo snickered.

High-speed snarkument!

This is really fun to read, but it triggers me how you wrote Aries wrong:facehoof:

Aries: surprisingly trusting, sometimes walking into the lions den. Able to bounce back, untouched by hardships, childish at heart and sees the world as magical, they do rather then talk and ask questions after the fact.

It's also worth noting Aries fiery temper. Can go from calm to furious in a matter of seconds if someone hits the right nerves, but usually calms down just as fast as they were angered.
I'm an Aries so I know this stuff. I'm know to interrupt heated arguments and make it out okay and I've had quite a lot of outbursts.

My mother and my oldest younger brother are Pisces and both of them loves the beach. I have two more brothers, but they are too young to show zodiac sign character traits.

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