When the Cake's go on vacation, and decide to bring Pinkie Pie and her friends, craziness is sure to happen. Can they all enjoy a day on the beach, or will everything become a little crazy?
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63w, 1dFebruary Write Off
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Hahaha, this could totally be an episode.
Poor Rarity, always been left behind.
I like it. It pretty much could be an episode.
May the Grace of the Valar Protect You
Shire Folk
This was a fun read. The humor was very much like the show. It was a bit too simple at times, though.
Also, sea turtles cannot retreat into their shells. ![]()
When I heard it was at the beach, All my head could hear was this....*SHOO, BE DO! SHOO, SHOO BE DO!!!*
This could be an episode, I'm impressed by how good the writing is. One thing though, Spike got left behind too, but you didn't write that in. No Sparity...![]()
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