When the Cake's go on vacation, and decide to bring Pinkie Pie and her friends, craziness is sure to happen. Can they all enjoy a day on the beach, or will everything become a little crazy?
Hahaha, this could totally be an episode.
Poor Rarity, always been left behind.
Could be a funny season 3 opening
I like it. It pretty much could be an episode.
May the Grace of the Valar Protect You
ITS A LOL
Very good story
Awesumelishness! delcious read! I am satisfied!
a tad simple but a lot of fun really enjoyed this
This was a fun read. The humor was very much like the show. It was a bit too simple at times, though.
Also, sea turtles cannot retreat into their shells.
Huh, learn something new everyday
When I heard it was at the beach, All my head could hear was this....*SHOO, BE DO! SHOO, SHOO BE DO!!!*
This was hilarious This would make an awesome episode!
This could be an episode, I'm impressed by how good the writing is. One thing though, Spike got left behind too, but you didn't write that in. No Sparity...