You misspelled "The" on the chapter title.

Other than that though:

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I was drunk, but fixed!

My favorite ship, also in convenient human form? This is great! Now I can read about them fucking each others brains out without feeling weird

This

Then update Magikarp

i lurves it

Nice set up. Can't wait to see where this goes!

~Skeeter The Lurker

Yay! There's not enough ZecoraMac in the fandom. Can't wait for more.

I was quite sad to see the first comment wasn't "They fight Crime."

Well rainbob...you have gotten me addicted to another one of your stories yet again... ...and i dare say i love you for that...

Oh, you...

Aaaand another feature, good on ya m8.

This doesn't invovle foalcon, does it? The Apple Bloom tag just made cautious- I mean curious.

Yo, "bemusement" might not mean what you think it means.

G'ole MPaint never ceases to amaze me.

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Like it wasn't weird before.

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Frickin' hilarious, dude!

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Why thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
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Also, thanks for the comment! Big fan of your work, and it just makes my day to see you see my stuff (that's not creepy or stalkerish, right? ).

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Thanks Mr. Tickler of Poop!
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What? No way! She's just part of the main cast, and is no way involved in the mature stuff!

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I ain't no dictionary.

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I agree with that!

2633621 Ah, good. Hate how things have become on this here site. Foalcon and incest getting featured. People....
Anyway, glad to see that humanized in general gets attention. Thank you for making sure of that. and well done on getting featured again

Mac is such a boss.

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Well, if you are looking for decent humanized, you might want to take a look at some of my stuff, old sport. Part of the reason I joined forces with Bob on this fic was due to the fact it was humanized.

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I can attest that Jerky here does indeed write some semen-licking good humanized stories!

2633696 Oh yeah. You're the one who wrote Fool's Gold. Loved that story. Sure, I'll take a look.

2633699 If Fool's Gold is anything to go by I have no doubts about that.

I was... pleasantly surprised! I don't judge based on concept, instead looking for solid punctuation and diction above all, then I worry about the characterization. Aside from a few tense issues here and there (Not enough to break immersion), you did very well. I like that Mac is stoic on the outside but he lets his adorkable side shine through on occasion, which seems accurate enough to him. No problem here.

I will admit, my jaw sorta hit the floor when the (redacted) showed up. That scene was all sorts of badass, something I hadn't expected at all. Which, of course, made it all the more awesome. Definite favorite here. Remember that there are still people with good taste on this website!

Came for Macora, stayed for the story

You've got an interesting perspective on Big Mac's character, and while I know this is going to be a porn fic, I hope Zecora gets a bit of analysis as well. I've seen all number of fics that really get under the skin of the Mane Six, or of Big Mac, or Spike, or the princesses, or even Lyra and Ditzy, but I've never seen anyone do a character study of Zecora. (I blame the rhyming--it's the same reason the poetically inclined Etrigan is so underused.)

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I agree with that wholeheartedly!
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Oh, wow, thanks so much! I've seen you around the comments of numerous stories and your word is very high in my opinion. I am super honored and I hope to keep your expectations up!
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Oh you dirty colt.
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It's going to be more of a romance with a few porn aspects when it's all said and done, amigo, rather than a porn with a few romance aspects.

2633850 I love 'The Walking Dead.'

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No, now you are the master.

Awesome xD Please hurry with next chapter

Come on, Bob. I came for the shameless pony/human porn, and you give me a plotline. Maaayn, you crazy.

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Lol

Dang there's a lot of swearing in this fic. Still, gotta love some MaCora.

"Jungle Fever," where have a heard this before?

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/22725/jungle-fever

MOAR!

I am now VERY interested. Not enough Mac/Zecora stories in my opinion, and even less human ones. This is gonna be good.

So, ah, when can we expect to see the next chapter? I'm not about to force a due date or anything, but I'm genuinely excited here!

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Soon. In fact, sooner than you'd think.

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I just need someone to edit the second chapter, but all my editors are busy.

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Well, that one's pony/futa, and with chapters that are WAY too long for a clopfic. (The last 8 are, anyways)

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And this is humanized, so it would then be considered pedophilia. Damn me for being a technical thinker...

So, daily updates correct?

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Oh Merc, you're my new favorite author!!!

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Back atcha, champ.

2635025 Exactly. If it did involve foalcon I would have been out of here: luckily RainbowBob is better than that. Speaking of pedophillia, foalcon is pretty much the the same deal.
...except with underage ponies.

Seriously, foalcon fans. Society frown upon bronies enough already, we don't need you fanning the flames.

I don't know where this story is going but the last time I viewed something that was "Jungle Fever" it did not end well.
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I need a new chapter, would you kindly?

You know, I've been thinking: Do stories with the "human" tag really need an "alternate universe" tag to back them up?

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Well, since there's no humanized tag, yeah. I mean, you do a human tag on Human in Equestria stories, and those ain't AU's. Besides, as the chapters progress, it'll be a bit more obvious that it's an AU.

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Would you kindly... powerful phrase...

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Bros before hoes, mate. Shoulda saved your friends instead of siding with the chick that drugged you multiple times.

Whew, got my daily dose of Rainbow Bob.

I wasn't gonna last one more day...

-YNA

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