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Ponies in Reality

All six main character ponies(and Spike )were transported into planet Earth by a book that was forbidden to be read by any pony except for Princess Celestia and Twilight. They will try to survive on planet Earth, if they even can. A special guest will be helping them find Equestria. And show them the odds and ends of Earth.

Chapters (3)

The Transportation · 30th May 2013 · 1,107 words
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A Destined Friendship · 6th Jun 2013 · 1,192 words
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The Outside World · 27th Jun 2013 · 1,013 words
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ponygirls

ponygirls #1 · May 30th, 2013 · · 1 · The Transportation ·

sorry for the silly mistakes. I will try to correct them.

walk-in closet brony

walk-in closet brony #2 · Jun 1st, 2013 · · 1 · The Transportation ·

Okay, um . . . wow.

Pretty . . . good I suppose. You have a like from me, but please correct the fact that everybody speaks SO mechanically! Also, it's okay to use a comma every now and then. They wont bite. It gets kind of annoying to the reader when they have to pause every five seconds after reading a sentence which is only a couple words long.

Otherwise, you're doing good!

crystalflower0029

crystalflower0029 #3 · Jun 1st, 2013 · · 1 · The Transportation ·

It's...ok. It all just sort of tumbled together really fast. Also you just sorta threw on Pewds and Marzia. It has potential, it just needs a touch up.

poisedanimeBloke